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1/11/2008 c2 37emichii
um... one sided karin/hitsu? okay then. sry i have no interest...

i wanna say congrats on ur effort.
1/11/2008 c1 emichii
hmm interesting! whose the girl?
12/26/2007 c2 16Mayan
Good job, although it seems a little rushed.

Hurry up and updat please.
12/23/2007 c2 3firequeenAzula
cute
12/22/2007 c2 8Soethe
awesome chapter! i love it ;D update soon!
12/22/2007 c2 MoonShadows717
"Good, now we can have another man in the house! So, when are you going to propose to my Karin-chan?" that was hillarous!

funny chap. but isn't the death of Yammi a lil' too fast? Well since you explained it... You know, its OK if you updated late, at least you updated... Try to improve you grammar and spelling then its ok. Try you best.

Ja ne!
12/18/2007 c1 Soethe
goo hitsukarin! nice start. update soon!
12/15/2007 c1 FuocoBay
Awesome start! who is the girl?, ik! can`t wait to read what happens next, hope you up-date very soon XD

Good Luck Writting the Next Chapter

And

Bye
12/13/2007 c1 2Sinful.Emerald
is this going to end up as hitsuhina or hitsuxoc?

cuz if it's a pairing that i...

reply soon!
12/10/2007 c1 MoonShadows717
PLEASE! Dnt tell me its a love triangle! Well you said its a HitsuKarin, so... mark your word. Onegai shimasu... Pls. update soon. And by the way, make a longer chapter too. Tnx.

That's all.

Ja ne!
12/1/2007 c1 8shirogane-hitsugaya
hey...i thought that's a lyric for the song in naruto the movie...what in the hell is it doing in a BLEACH FANFIC - ENGLISH - HUMOR/ROMANCE - HITSUGAYA & KARIN?YOU'RE INSANE...!
10/16/2007 c1 6bitter-sweet91
heh? sugoi ne! soshite, i hope you write more. My japanese isn't great at all although i'm half nipon. dakara ganbatte!

yorokonde

Akira

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