
6/26/2013 c6 karavinemarinas
Great Story, as for any sequel or continuation, Iwould say, Yes please...Lokking forward to a sequel...
Great Story, as for any sequel or continuation, Iwould say, Yes please...Lokking forward to a sequel...
11/5/2008 c6
7bdlywrttn
Well, it is fluff, but for a lazy (or procrastinaty) day when I wanted to search for a Detty story, it was just right. :-)
I don't think it needs to be continued really, you did a great job tying everything up nicely. Also, you did keep everybody in character most of the time. At least I couldn't tell if they were. Great job, and you have a very healthy attitude when it comes to your writing.

Well, it is fluff, but for a lazy (or procrastinaty) day when I wanted to search for a Detty story, it was just right. :-)
I don't think it needs to be continued really, you did a great job tying everything up nicely. Also, you did keep everybody in character most of the time. At least I couldn't tell if they were. Great job, and you have a very healthy attitude when it comes to your writing.
9/27/2008 c6
49Jacal Ste. Worme
Aww! That was nice! XD The Gio part was cute, too. Poor thing. Hearing Daniel's name aloud in time of release, tsk, tsk... Hahahah... Well, Daniel is the man so I've no qualms with that! Good job! Hope you'd write more BD fics! XD

Aww! That was nice! XD The Gio part was cute, too. Poor thing. Hearing Daniel's name aloud in time of release, tsk, tsk... Hahahah... Well, Daniel is the man so I've no qualms with that! Good job! Hope you'd write more BD fics! XD
5/21/2008 c4 waterlily85
Love the story so far. I have to admit as a disable person myself I was a bit offended by the idea of Rosa not attending a "mainstream" school because of her CP until I read your A/N at the end. I appologize for that. It has been my experiene that doctors don't know crap and tend to tell people the worst case sanorio (sp?) My parents were told I would neve walk because of a spine birth defect that I have. By the time I was in preschool I was walking with crutches and continued to do so until I was nine when I decided to stick with a wheelchair full time. Can't wait to read me...sorry that got so long *blushes*
Love the story so far. I have to admit as a disable person myself I was a bit offended by the idea of Rosa not attending a "mainstream" school because of her CP until I read your A/N at the end. I appologize for that. It has been my experiene that doctors don't know crap and tend to tell people the worst case sanorio (sp?) My parents were told I would neve walk because of a spine birth defect that I have. By the time I was in preschool I was walking with crutches and continued to do so until I was nine when I decided to stick with a wheelchair full time. Can't wait to read me...sorry that got so long *blushes*
3/31/2008 c6 WHITE ANGELS WINGS
HI,
4 STAR ALL WORTHY READING IT.SEND YOU A SMILE :)
WHITE ANGELS WINGS
HI,
4 STAR ALL WORTHY READING IT.SEND YOU A SMILE :)
WHITE ANGELS WINGS