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11/29/2010 c1 3CattyNebulart
Well I don't read/watch Negima, but Negi must be some kind of numb skull to so obviously not recognize his father. Other than that kind of fitting for the holiday season and slight melancholic.
6/17/2010 c1 DarknightZero13
Not bad.
3/5/2008 c1 57Stone-Man85
Pretty good story, Tikigod, pretty good.

I liked the end when he slipped on a banana peel.

Man oh man, Negi is quite the masochistic helper. (That's how he ends up with losing an arm...or so I read at Wikipedia) :/
1/4/2008 c1 23ChildInMe
I love it!
11/3/2007 c1 2Norbert the Dragon
yay that was cute! I think you and I should start a group for unappreciated stories :)

This deserves more than one stinky review, so I'll make it two!
10/21/2007 c1 9The Ansem Man
Not a bad effort.

You could have rambled a bit less in the beginning, and I saw a few technical mistakes as well. And a tip for having author commentary? Don't make it technically obvious (as in don't put A/N: and such, that's the WRONG way to break the fourth wall!)

Best of luck, and keep writing. FOR THE FUTURE!

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