
2/11/2017 c1 AnNhien
I really like this story.
Can I get your permission to translate it into my language, please ?
Thank you in advance.
I really like this story.
Can I get your permission to translate it into my language, please ?
Thank you in advance.
10/23/2007 c1
1canucme1603
i like that. after reading the last book and finding out abour snape and lily, i just fell in love with them. it's a cute story...keep on the great work!

i like that. after reading the last book and finding out abour snape and lily, i just fell in love with them. it's a cute story...keep on the great work!
10/22/2007 c1 Rachel
I enjoyed this very much! Thanks for sharing - Snape's story is so sad, it's nice to see authors delve into his feelings. My only bit of constructive criticism is that you seem to use "in vain" twice in the line about Severus' struggle with Nagini. Otherwise, beautifully written. Thanks!
I enjoyed this very much! Thanks for sharing - Snape's story is so sad, it's nice to see authors delve into his feelings. My only bit of constructive criticism is that you seem to use "in vain" twice in the line about Severus' struggle with Nagini. Otherwise, beautifully written. Thanks!
10/21/2007 c1
2MxAzingXSpork
That was simply... amazing.
:D it was more than amazing. It was FANTASTIC! xD I LOVED IT!

That was simply... amazing.
:D it was more than amazing. It was FANTASTIC! xD I LOVED IT!