for Rain Revised8/29/2009 c1 Animal Mongoose
I really like this. It seems like it's going to be about Royce. I do wish you would continue it soon!
I really like this. It seems like it's going to be about Royce. I do wish you would continue it soon!
10/19/2008 c1 
6aandm20
Aw! Dam that sucks about her car, which by the way is flippin awesome!
This is really good so far!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
6aandm20Aw! Dam that sucks about her car, which by the way is flippin awesome!
This is really good so far!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
2/14/2008 c1 3moonlit mage
I hope you'll continue to revise this, as I read the first and the differences between them are noticable; a lot of people say they revised it, but when you read it there's hardly anything changed. I hope to see the next chapter soon ^^
3moonlit mageI hope you'll continue to revise this, as I read the first and the differences between them are noticable; a lot of people say they revised it, but when you read it there's hardly anything changed. I hope to see the next chapter soon ^^
10/29/2007 c1 sprocket51
hey! i like where this is going!
now, did he drive off with her car or did she just see him drive off? lol. i was a little confused.
i can't wait to see what she's gonna do! will you be updating soon?
hey! i like where this is going!
now, did he drive off with her car or did she just see him drive off? lol. i was a little confused.
i can't wait to see what she's gonna do! will you be updating soon?