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2/5/2009 c1 4Vidmaster
Well the chapter was okay. I really think you went a little bit too fast with the story. In a sense it feels unfinished, but whatever. You didn't seem to have any grammatical or spelling errors. The chapter itself wasn't really interesting. Nothing much really happened (and I'm not talking about sex). I give this a 7/10.
11/3/2007 c1 113Tiger5913
Hmm, well, I thought they kinda confessed their love a little too quickly, but I guess that's just the way it goes, heh. You know how I am about Bryan and Shina. ^^0 I think they have a great brother-sister kind of relationship, so I wonder how they will get over their mild attraction here. Ah well, I can't wait to see Bryan with the new lady that you created for him. :) Write another BR story soon~!

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