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Poor Tenten...poor-whats his name? Yutaka...hopefully he won't be an a** like his father...a hot, sexy, yummyful a**...AHH bad L-E-G-W-H,bad L-E-G-W-H, bad...must. stay. a. certain. degree. of. fandom. of. birdbutt...still, GREAT STORY!
5loves-emo-guys-with-hairPoor Tenten...poor-whats his name? Yutaka...hopefully he won't be an a** like his father...a hot, sexy, yummyful a**...AHH bad L-E-G-W-H,bad L-E-G-W-H, bad...must. stay. a. certain. degree. of. fandom. of. birdbutt...still, GREAT STORY!
11/7/2007 c7 Snow Bunny 1
Hi
As much as I like Sasuke,you make me want to kill him.Epesially Orochimaru with his sound nins.
Poor Tenten,she's finally with the love of her life and now he's
dead.At least he died as a hero,well to me anyway.What also sucks is,she has his baby 9 months later.
From:Scotty-Lover
PS:It's funny what you put in the epilogue.I like the one about Hinata and the wood fairy,but I like the one about Sasuke more.
Hi
As much as I like Sasuke,you make me want to kill him.Epesially Orochimaru with his sound nins.
Poor Tenten,she's finally with the love of her life and now he's
dead.At least he died as a hero,well to me anyway.What also sucks is,she has his baby 9 months later.
From:Scotty-Lover
PS:It's funny what you put in the epilogue.I like the one about Hinata and the wood fairy,but I like the one about Sasuke more.
11/7/2007 c7 8Shikyo no Amatsu Shinsei
omg! i'm so shockd! i knew u warned that ther wud b character death.. but not... (CRIES PITIFULLY) NEJI! at least Tenten's happy... i guess... she gets a son to remind her of neji... i guess that's kinda like Kurenai when Asuma dies... ah well... this story was really gud! it struck my heart FULL ON when you sed the words, 'cold, lifeless, empty, white orbs...' or smth along those lines... so yeah... WELL DONE! except i think this story shud b romance/tragedy or romance/angst or smth... anyways, till next time! :D
8Shikyo no Amatsu Shinseiomg! i'm so shockd! i knew u warned that ther wud b character death.. but not... (CRIES PITIFULLY) NEJI! at least Tenten's happy... i guess... she gets a son to remind her of neji... i guess that's kinda like Kurenai when Asuma dies... ah well... this story was really gud! it struck my heart FULL ON when you sed the words, 'cold, lifeless, empty, white orbs...' or smth along those lines... so yeah... WELL DONE! except i think this story shud b romance/tragedy or romance/angst or smth... anyways, till next time! :D
11/6/2007 c7 Youndime16
i'm sorry but to me the last chapter was a disaster! A compleate disaster. But oh well nothing i can do about it
i'm sorry but to me the last chapter was a disaster! A compleate disaster. But oh well nothing i can do about it
11/6/2007 c6 Youndime16
no! Plz don't let neji die! T.T Plese! And when is shikamaru and ino going to get togeather?
no! Plz don't let neji die! T.T Plese! And when is shikamaru and ino going to get togeather?
11/6/2007 c6 Snow Bunny 1
Hi
I cant believe Neji asked Tenten that
And here I thought everything was going good for them,then bam! there in a fight again
from:scotty-lover
Hi
I cant believe Neji asked Tenten that
And here I thought everything was going good for them,then bam! there in a fight again
from:scotty-lover
11/6/2007 c6 5iloooveinuyasha1
yay fight fight! :D
loved the chapter! :D
(pity it't T rated though... *argh kakashi get the hell outa my head!*)
moving on i likey! :D
update soon!
Ja!
5iloooveinuyasha1yay fight fight! :D
loved the chapter! :D
(pity it't T rated though... *argh kakashi get the hell outa my head!*)
moving on i likey! :D
update soon!
Ja!
10/29/2007 c4 Snow Bunny 1
Hi ^^
I like it so far
Even tho you didnt descirbe much of the battle,I could still picture it
You should of made the fight longer...Sasuke is not easily beaten
From:Scotty-Lover
Hi ^^
I like it so far
Even tho you didnt descirbe much of the battle,I could still picture it
You should of made the fight longer...Sasuke is not easily beaten
From:Scotty-Lover
10/26/2007 c3 Snow Bunny 1
Hi ^^
Why would somebody want to marry there own cousin?...That's incet,ew!
Omg!I cant believe Ino almost got rapped...Ino was lucky Shikamaru heard her.
I also cant believe Tenten would cry watching a chick flick?
It's obvise that Neji likes Tenten,but the question is "will they end up together?"
From:Scotty-Lover
Hi ^^
Why would somebody want to marry there own cousin?...That's incet,ew!
Omg!I cant believe Ino almost got rapped...Ino was lucky Shikamaru heard her.
I also cant believe Tenten would cry watching a chick flick?
It's obvise that Neji likes Tenten,but the question is "will they end up together?"
From:Scotty-Lover
10/24/2007 c2 iloooveinuyasha1
ooh so both neji and tenny are engaged...
the plot thickens... lol! :D
i loved it!:D
what does "Oyasumnasi" mean? (i'm japanses but don't study the language... aparently my parents don't want me learning because i am japanese.. weird!)
anyways update soon!
(i would write more but english homework calls so)
Ja!
ooh so both neji and tenny are engaged...
the plot thickens... lol! :D
i loved it!:D
what does "Oyasumnasi" mean? (i'm japanses but don't study the language... aparently my parents don't want me learning because i am japanese.. weird!)
anyways update soon!
(i would write more but english homework calls so)
Ja!