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2/29/2016 c1 115dogbertcarroll
I like it.
2/29/2012 c1 Rose1948
Interesting beginning in a prologue-ish kind of way. Any chance of this being continued?
2/21/2012 c1 Ranmaleopard
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
12/13/2011 c1 4Ashleythetiger
duo?

hmm nanoha strikers thingy(cannot recall full title)

so ranma either is gaining telepathie(sp?)

or stress is getting to him?

await more
4/17/2011 c1 2GeorgeTobor
This story follows my belief that Ranma could be insane and dangerous, only held in check by his honor. Make him think he has lost his honor and the bloodbath begins.
10/4/2008 c1 36Six-string Samurai
Feels more like a prologue than an actual first chapter. It's a bit tough to slog through the voices in Ranma's head when they're all jumbled up like that. Maybe there is a way to differentiate the voices in future chapters, should they still be in effect.

Other than that, it's a catchy start.
7/4/2008 c1 14Rubedo the Crystal Blood
You can't tell it's a monologue? Okay, maybe there really isn't a plot here, but quit acting like an over-sensitive little girl. We can all show you works much worse than this one. If you want, I have a link to the worst Gundam SEED Destiny lemon in the world.

Mind you I'm still saying it needs a plot. Not taking sides here.
11/1/2007 c1 6Cptdave
Wow! Ranma with MPD like a MoFo! love it so far, can't wait to see where you're headed. Another mallet wielding girl? Skuld perhaps? Going to be interesting if its an AMG cross. Love how its written! Ranma with a pervert personality is interesting, esp how all the other personalities don't like him!
10/25/2007 c1 Demonlord87
There's not much to be critical of here.. yet. It's definatly a good idea that I'm going to have to keep an eye upon to see how it develops. You got me interested with it, now keep it going so I don't go nuts trying to figure out what happens next!
10/23/2007 c1 15Locke1
Hrm...

You have a plot... device... yes... a plot device on your hands with no plot to process it through. God honestly, you need a plot before you write. Well, at least you got Ranma talking to himself... Can't say much more about this though. But seriously, stop, think of a plot, THEN continue. There is nothing worst than a crossover with no plot... seriously...

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