for Unlikely Alliance10/31/2014 c1 Kanon58
the ending was kinda sad... D: aww...Jade...Thats good buddy..you do more pranks with Luke but he has to die...and Guy no you cant pay Luke for the prank cuz he will dissapear xD
the ending was kinda sad... D: aww...Jade...Thats good buddy..you do more pranks with Luke but he has to die...and Guy no you cant pay Luke for the prank cuz he will dissapear xD
11/3/2007 c1 
10Natsuuro
Gwaah! This is great! You must write more things! Jade and Luke concocting experiments and pranking others. Hehehe. Good idea as to where they were, though. I wouldn't imagine they would be back there. And the dialogue is true to the scene. Very nice. ^ ^
10NatsuuroGwaah! This is great! You must write more things! Jade and Luke concocting experiments and pranking others. Hehehe. Good idea as to where they were, though. I wouldn't imagine they would be back there. And the dialogue is true to the scene. Very nice. ^ ^
10/23/2007 c1 Laurie Jo
Wow, this little scene is one of those rare moments of the game where you see Luke and Jade bonding. It's hard to believe that they used to dislike each other so much before!
Thanks for writing this fanfic. XD It was hilarious, and you portrayed their point of view beautifully. I loled hard.
I didn't like that last line so much, but still, it's your fanfic.
Wow, this little scene is one of those rare moments of the game where you see Luke and Jade bonding. It's hard to believe that they used to dislike each other so much before!
Thanks for writing this fanfic. XD It was hilarious, and you portrayed their point of view beautifully. I loled hard.
I didn't like that last line so much, but still, it's your fanfic.
10/23/2007 c1 Random Reviewer
It was quite funny to read - and a decent story idea too. I always did wonder what the two pranksters thought of their prank...
You also happened to keep the two in character. That's a good thing. I must say, though, the last line of the story you could do without. I say, keep it lighthearted.
It was quite funny to read - and a decent story idea too. I always did wonder what the two pranksters thought of their prank...
You also happened to keep the two in character. That's a good thing. I must say, though, the last line of the story you could do without. I say, keep it lighthearted.
10/23/2007 c1 Hiyusatsu
Wah. That was so fun to read *-*
But you did not have to remmember about Luke, you know T^T çdl I hated the end.
Anyway, nice fic *-*
Wah. That was so fun to read *-*
But you did not have to remmember about Luke, you know T^T çdl I hated the end.
Anyway, nice fic *-*
10/23/2007 c1 starkitty
That was really cute.
That was really cute.