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11/2/2007 c1 5The Last Cousland
OMFG! This is really good cheeseball! Yeah, it could be tweaked a little, but there is ginormous improvement from your last piece! I'm proud of you! *hugs* Interesting twist to have Ino die... Very interesting indeed! ^_^ Hope to see an update! You left us with a cliffhanger, dearie! Wuv you!
10/25/2007 c1 1MangaLover24
haha ok, i know this may sound annoying...but you spelled "sware" wrong...its actually "swear" haha ok sorry...XP umm this may sound annoying too, but i think you should make Sakura stronger, and not so weak and cry-babyish...sorry...XP but it was a nice beginning! please update!

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