for It's Not Over9/19/2015 c11 
21Psycho Tangerine
Nice story. Your character David was believable. Trent was really calm considering he had just be told he would explode. He even had the presence of mind to take R.S. with him.
21Psycho TangerineNice story. Your character David was believable. Trent was really calm considering he had just be told he would explode. He even had the presence of mind to take R.S. with him.
6/19/2013 c11 Guest
Why haven't u finished it
Why haven't u finished it
5/9/2010 c11 5fallen-wolfborn
SSSSWWWWEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTT! Did the space 'splosion come from the MMPR movie? Nice touch.
5fallen-wolfbornSSSSWWWWEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTT! Did the space 'splosion come from the MMPR movie? Nice touch.
11/8/2007 c11 12HoboLover
Damn!
You had to end it when it was getting good!
oh well that's a cliff hanger for yea...
haha lol
I liked it!
12HoboLoverDamn!
You had to end it when it was getting good!
oh well that's a cliff hanger for yea...
haha lol
I liked it!
11/8/2007 c10 HoboLover
Oh...poor Trent...he died for the greater good!
and poor Cassidy for killing her friend Devan!
This is getting good!
Oh...poor Trent...he died for the greater good!
and poor Cassidy for killing her friend Devan!
This is getting good!
11/8/2007 c9 HoboLover
Holy crap...Cassidy was Hime...and she's the Pink Dino Ranger!
o.O
*dies of a heart attack*
haha lol
It's really good!
Holy crap...Cassidy was Hime...and she's the Pink Dino Ranger!
o.O
*dies of a heart attack*
haha lol
It's really good!
11/8/2007 c8 HoboLover
OMG...Get out of the building!
*Rushes in and saves everyone except Hime*
Brb
*Runs back in as the place blows up sending my flying towards everyone with Hime in my arms*
...Can't let her be destroyed...that's our job!
lol
OMG...Get out of the building!
*Rushes in and saves everyone except Hime*
Brb
*Runs back in as the place blows up sending my flying towards everyone with Hime in my arms*
...Can't let her be destroyed...that's our job!
lol
11/7/2007 c10 3hewhoreaps
Well this was a kinda of a sad chapter but hopefully they are down to only one bad guy left to deal with
look forward to more
3hewhoreapsWell this was a kinda of a sad chapter but hopefully they are down to only one bad guy left to deal with
look forward to more