
11/8/2007 c16
28Liz4
Aw, you made me cry. I hope the show doesn't go this way (no offense), but it made for a great story. This was really good - I can't believe it's only your first fic :) Dare we hope there will be more soon?

Aw, you made me cry. I hope the show doesn't go this way (no offense), but it made for a great story. This was really good - I can't believe it's only your first fic :) Dare we hope there will be more soon?
11/8/2007 c14
2etraya
have just discovered this story am loving it, hope you can update soon though am hoping that somehow allen is not dead i love him so much i dont care about the whole traitor thing!

have just discovered this story am loving it, hope you can update soon though am hoping that somehow allen is not dead i love him so much i dont care about the whole traitor thing!
11/8/2007 c14
22LaneIA
I didn't see that coming! Great now I need to explain to my co-workers why I'm crying!
Nice work, seriously!
Lane

I didn't see that coming! Great now I need to explain to my co-workers why I'm crying!
Nice work, seriously!
Lane
11/8/2007 c14
2El Gringo Loco
A good chapter that ties up a rather sticky loose end. I'd wondered how you were going to deal with the threat that was Alan. Gisborne it seems has no love for traiters. (Does anyone?) Perhaps he believes that - If they'll betray someone to him for gold. They'll betray him to a higher bidder later.) On the other hand, I doubt that Robin and company will take kindly to this turn of events.

A good chapter that ties up a rather sticky loose end. I'd wondered how you were going to deal with the threat that was Alan. Gisborne it seems has no love for traiters. (Does anyone?) Perhaps he believes that - If they'll betray someone to him for gold. They'll betray him to a higher bidder later.) On the other hand, I doubt that Robin and company will take kindly to this turn of events.
11/7/2007 c13 El Gringo Loco
Ch 1-13 a good story, well written and quite readable. Alan's betrayal, coupled with new found love and Sir Edward's death make for a interesting mix. But they do move the story along rather nicely. I look forward to reading more.
To my mind the outlaws made the wrong choice regarding Alan. He had first betrayed them out of greed and self preservation. Now, furter motivated by revenge, he has no reason to maintain even a semblance of loyalty. (Neither betraying Marian or helping to kill Robin) I suspect that somewhere between fluffy interludes that their mercy will come back to haunt them.
Ch 1-13 a good story, well written and quite readable. Alan's betrayal, coupled with new found love and Sir Edward's death make for a interesting mix. But they do move the story along rather nicely. I look forward to reading more.
To my mind the outlaws made the wrong choice regarding Alan. He had first betrayed them out of greed and self preservation. Now, furter motivated by revenge, he has no reason to maintain even a semblance of loyalty. (Neither betraying Marian or helping to kill Robin) I suspect that somewhere between fluffy interludes that their mercy will come back to haunt them.
11/7/2007 c13
4Lessien-Dorthonion
I love it, I havn't read this before, I readed all the chapters that you haved up soo far and I love it, I will absolute keep reading. (sorry that I may have spelled wrong)

I love it, I havn't read this before, I readed all the chapters that you haved up soo far and I love it, I will absolute keep reading. (sorry that I may have spelled wrong)
11/7/2007 c13
28Liz4
Still loving this :) So much Will and Djaq goodness. Can't wait to see what they decide to do about Alan. More, please!

Still loving this :) So much Will and Djaq goodness. Can't wait to see what they decide to do about Alan. More, please!