for T'Lana4/9/2010 c2 
2LIGHTNSHADOWS
Hey SlashBaby, I found your story and i just love it. I always thought trip and Archer were a better couple. I was wondering if you would ever consider finishing the story, maybe having Trip or archer fall pregnant due to help from freaky fertility aliens as the Enterprise crew help T'Lana get back to her own reality. Thanks,Lightnshadows.
2LIGHTNSHADOWSHey SlashBaby, I found your story and i just love it. I always thought trip and Archer were a better couple. I was wondering if you would ever consider finishing the story, maybe having Trip or archer fall pregnant due to help from freaky fertility aliens as the Enterprise crew help T'Lana get back to her own reality. Thanks,Lightnshadows.
2/11/2010 c2 Mary
What you've written so far is fine, short but setting up an unusual situation. Now what you need to do is finish it. I'm intrigued to see where it is going.
What you've written so far is fine, short but setting up an unusual situation. Now what you need to do is finish it. I'm intrigued to see where it is going.
11/23/2007 c1 peruser
Since you're disappointed in the lack of reviews, here's one for you... and it's good! I like the premise of the story (surprise! it's a girl!), I like the tone of the story (kind of wry humor...hiya pop!), and I like the potential (where's she from?, how'd she get there?, what's her mission?, HOW WAS SHE CONCIEVED?). My only complaint is what you've already said... too short. PLEASE GIVE US MORE! How's that for encouragement. :-)
Since you're disappointed in the lack of reviews, here's one for you... and it's good! I like the premise of the story (surprise! it's a girl!), I like the tone of the story (kind of wry humor...hiya pop!), and I like the potential (where's she from?, how'd she get there?, what's her mission?, HOW WAS SHE CONCIEVED?). My only complaint is what you've already said... too short. PLEASE GIVE US MORE! How's that for encouragement. :-)
11/3/2007 c2 lunaz
Interesting fic.I will look forward to reading more of the story. One thing though you might look into having someone helping you with checking for spelling mistakes.
Interesting fic.I will look forward to reading more of the story. One thing though you might look into having someone helping you with checking for spelling mistakes.
11/2/2007 c2 12mpalmer89
I wouldn't be surprised if the girl was cloned from their DNA and T'Pol gave birth for them. A love triangle between Archer, Tucker and T'Pol would explain her name also. A love triangle in another reality that don't exist in their own Enterprise would make sense about her birth and shock T'Pol as well. How did the transporter miss is what I would worry about.
Possible causes: Transporter disruption by the Suliban during escape. Transport into the other reality through an unstable wormhole that closed in on itself or a result of a temporal faction trying to prevent her death when the suliban come after her and find out she is no longer on Enterprise in the new timeline where her worried parents battle for their lives.
On a side note you forgot the "d" in need on chapter two, but other than that it is a fine story.
12mpalmer89I wouldn't be surprised if the girl was cloned from their DNA and T'Pol gave birth for them. A love triangle between Archer, Tucker and T'Pol would explain her name also. A love triangle in another reality that don't exist in their own Enterprise would make sense about her birth and shock T'Pol as well. How did the transporter miss is what I would worry about.
Possible causes: Transporter disruption by the Suliban during escape. Transport into the other reality through an unstable wormhole that closed in on itself or a result of a temporal faction trying to prevent her death when the suliban come after her and find out she is no longer on Enterprise in the new timeline where her worried parents battle for their lives.
On a side note you forgot the "d" in need on chapter two, but other than that it is a fine story.