
4/10/2017 c1 xXSpyderXx
This was soo good, i hope you can write a second chapter or something
This was soo good, i hope you can write a second chapter or something
4/19/2015 c1 42 4ever
Ho ho ho, stupid twolegs. Also...I may or may not start shipping HollyxBreeze now... :) You know how I am. You decide. But wait. HollyxBreeze interferes with JayxBreeze. WE CANNOT HAVE THIS! HOLLYBREEZE GO OUT OF MY BRAIN'S WINDOW.
Ho ho ho, stupid twolegs. Also...I may or may not start shipping HollyxBreeze now... :) You know how I am. You decide. But wait. HollyxBreeze interferes with JayxBreeze. WE CANNOT HAVE THIS! HOLLYBREEZE GO OUT OF MY BRAIN'S WINDOW.
4/10/2013 c1 Twists
I was all, ooh! HollyxBreeze! Then I realised they were half-siblings... awkward.
I was all, ooh! HollyxBreeze! Then I realised they were half-siblings... awkward.
11/25/2012 c1 Guest
cool like it
cool like it
10/16/2012 c1 Guest
Aw, what a great fic!
Aw, what a great fic!
4/11/2012 c1 IchigoMxHarryP
I imagine we really must've looked insane to them.. But admittedly, I'm not scared of black cats. I love them!
I imagine we really must've looked insane to them.. But admittedly, I'm not scared of black cats. I love them!
4/4/2012 c1 Hi10000000
Halloween! :DDD
Halloween! :DDD
5/9/2011 c1
1PhoenixDragonNightmare
Looooove it! :D
Just one TINY little problem. Breezepaw and Hollypaw are half-siblings. . . .which sorta disturbs me.
But that's NOTHING compared to what you wrote! You have AWESOME ideas, please post more chapters to this!
~Phoenix

Looooove it! :D
Just one TINY little problem. Breezepaw and Hollypaw are half-siblings. . . .which sorta disturbs me.
But that's NOTHING compared to what you wrote! You have AWESOME ideas, please post more chapters to this!
~Phoenix
11/20/2010 c1 MyrtleFalls
Good job Moonstar-Kiwi! Also, I really like your Falling Smoke story. It's great! Ieri or Irei or Iri or Eri? Oh, and I know that was random. *sigh* But, hey, you know. Anyways, great story.
~~MyrtleFalls
Good job Moonstar-Kiwi! Also, I really like your Falling Smoke story. It's great! Ieri or Irei or Iri or Eri? Oh, and I know that was random. *sigh* But, hey, you know. Anyways, great story.
~~MyrtleFalls
11/27/2009 c1
4HeyLadyKay
Awesome! LUVED IT! There were very few mistakes, despite not being proofread! ;P Tee hee! XD I luv Halloween...so...much...SUGAR!
Luv,
Lightkit
SUGAR! XD

Awesome! LUVED IT! There were very few mistakes, despite not being proofread! ;P Tee hee! XD I luv Halloween...so...much...SUGAR!
Luv,
Lightkit
SUGAR! XD
4/21/2009 c1 blah blabh bbbbbbllllllahhhh
Col!
Col!