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86AlyssaOtaku69
The ending made me laugh. He literally asked her what she wanted the day before Christmas. Good read.
86AlyssaOtaku69The ending made me laugh. He literally asked her what she wanted the day before Christmas. Good read.
6/21/2013 c3 MIRIAN
Que tierno final
Que tierno final
12/12/2011 c3 RosieVIII
i usally dont read when its femNaru or femSasu but i loved this one it was so cute ^3^
i usally dont read when its femNaru or femSasu but i loved this one it was so cute ^3^
2/20/2011 c3 Faith
Hey, I love this story and over all it was very good. The only problem I had with it was sometimes you messed up don't on your grammer but your tense of a word, but no worries as a fello writer, I know we all make these smiple mistakes. Just next time make sure you double check be for posting. I'm looking forward to new work from you and good luck.
Ja ne
Hey, I love this story and over all it was very good. The only problem I had with it was sometimes you messed up don't on your grammer but your tense of a word, but no worries as a fello writer, I know we all make these smiple mistakes. Just next time make sure you double check be for posting. I'm looking forward to new work from you and good luck.
Ja ne
11/22/2007 c3 1Foxluna
wow 3rd child and SAKURA and Gaara got married too? yay and HINATA and KIBA too well everyone prettymuch got married huh? well im happy for all of them OH and tell me the title for the next story please so i can read it thanks! and whole lots of praise for this story! later!
1Foxlunawow 3rd child and SAKURA and Gaara got married too? yay and HINATA and KIBA too well everyone prettymuch got married huh? well im happy for all of them OH and tell me the title for the next story please so i can read it thanks! and whole lots of praise for this story! later!
11/21/2007 c3 1Hikory
I loved this chap.It was perfect it held the wedding(which was important cause it was the center point of the entire fic)and had an epiloge or whatever it's called.I'm surprised that Tsuande isn't tellin Naruto the same things that jiraya is/was. But then again I have a feeling that Tsuande already knew that Naruto loved Sasuke and that she,Tsuande,and everyone else wasn't loosing her they were just about to gain more family members to love and spoil. O.o Sasuke sure works fast to have three kids in five years,though I don't think Naruto's complaining one bit.If Sasuke wanted to give Naruto a gift he could give her scrap book or video tape of everything that happened before they got engaged to everyone else's happiness.While I'm sad that it's over I'm glad there was a happy ending.
1HikoryI loved this chap.It was perfect it held the wedding(which was important cause it was the center point of the entire fic)and had an epiloge or whatever it's called.I'm surprised that Tsuande isn't tellin Naruto the same things that jiraya is/was. But then again I have a feeling that Tsuande already knew that Naruto loved Sasuke and that she,Tsuande,and everyone else wasn't loosing her they were just about to gain more family members to love and spoil. O.o Sasuke sure works fast to have three kids in five years,though I don't think Naruto's complaining one bit.If Sasuke wanted to give Naruto a gift he could give her scrap book or video tape of everything that happened before they got engaged to everyone else's happiness.While I'm sad that it's over I'm glad there was a happy ending.