
3/17/2008 c1
7Song Of The Sparrow
1st, I love the title!
I really liked the death scene, and how you made the evr powerful Boy Wonder...
A love-sick Boy Blunder

1st, I love the title!
I really liked the death scene, and how you made the evr powerful Boy Wonder...
A love-sick Boy Blunder
3/17/2008 c4
5Mio Amore
Loved it! :) Just a little confused at what happened... Maybe if you could kind of, send me a small summary? And can't wait for the next chapter in Who am I Now!

Loved it! :) Just a little confused at what happened... Maybe if you could kind of, send me a small summary? And can't wait for the next chapter in Who am I Now!
3/1/2008 c3
7LynetteRowan
I would love to see a slightly . . . happier short. This one was good though. Keep it up cuz I want to keep reading.

I would love to see a slightly . . . happier short. This one was good though. Keep it up cuz I want to keep reading.
12/30/2007 c3 ninjabunnyoverlord
well ok.
well ok.
11/24/2007 c2 NinjaBunnyOverlord
very nice. A softer side of malchior ya ain't used to see'in. Well done, I'll wait for an update.
very nice. A softer side of malchior ya ain't used to see'in. Well done, I'll wait for an update.
11/4/2007 c1
18DarkGirlRavenGrayson
o, raven died! =[ yes, i did hed [spelling?] ur warning, but curiosity gets the best of me. at least they loved each other for the little time they had. hope to see more soon from u u r awesome!
ur friend
-DGRG14

o, raven died! =[ yes, i did hed [spelling?] ur warning, but curiosity gets the best of me. at least they loved each other for the little time they had. hope to see more soon from u u r awesome!
ur friend
-DGRG14