
9/4/2021 c5 Zeke
DAMN! wish there was more.
DAMN! wish there was more.
6/24/2015 c5 Guest
GREAT STORY SO FAR . Plssssss continue
GREAT STORY SO FAR . Plssssss continue
8/29/2012 c5
4iluvninjas
oh! my! GOD! cliffhanger! and it was going to the good part to! THIS IS SO INTRIGUING TO ME!

oh! my! GOD! cliffhanger! and it was going to the good part to! THIS IS SO INTRIGUING TO ME!
1/29/2012 c4 cakeesuki
I'm loving this story! I hope you update soon... I see it's been awhile since you have. I'd be awfully let down if I didn't get to read the rest :(
I'm loving this story! I hope you update soon... I see it's been awhile since you have. I'd be awfully let down if I didn't get to read the rest :(
1/29/2012 c4 Gaiseric
It's an enjoyable and unique concept, which is always welcome when you're sifting through barely acceptable re-writes of canon events.
Will we be given any further in-depth background to Mizuki? Will Hanabi ask Konohamaru?
It might be funny if you include a bit of overbearing parenting from Hiashi when Hinata becomes more involved.
A good story so far, looking forward to the next installment.
It's an enjoyable and unique concept, which is always welcome when you're sifting through barely acceptable re-writes of canon events.
Will we be given any further in-depth background to Mizuki? Will Hanabi ask Konohamaru?
It might be funny if you include a bit of overbearing parenting from Hiashi when Hinata becomes more involved.
A good story so far, looking forward to the next installment.