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8/30/2008 c2 xxguesswhoxx
lolz! XD i loved it
8/8/2008 c2 3Sighcoe
very well done! this is so cool! really great story! hehehe~
7/2/2008 c2 1Valentine Satiguss
Hahahahaha.

That was just so cute!
5/7/2008 c2 6False-Image
Aw! How cute! It'd be great if you could make a multi-chapter story about this situation. I'd definitely read it =)
4/21/2008 c2 Laegdin
This was a great story, especially the way in which things are seen from the perspective of the other employees. Loved the idea of the design dept panicking when Shikamaru is fired, only to end up taking bets. Hehe.

A few typos here and there, but I thought the pacing was well done. The story kept moving forward very nicely.

Good luck with your writing.
4/20/2008 c2 anon
It was beautiful! Absolutely wonderful! (throws cookies) You deserve a million cookies (or something equally sweet). I loved the way this fic is written. Good work. XD
3/31/2008 c2 smile365
absolutely amazing. i think i'm in some sort of shock because it was just that good! i really enjoyed your style of writing, not too choppy but not too lengthy and detailed. thank you so much! i must check if you've written other fanfics. :)
3/30/2008 c2 xSayuri-sanx
WAHAHAHAAHHA that was amazing! XD
3/20/2008 c2 6Krazy Naoko
I loved it! mentioned much less than the Uchiha, Naruto is still the main char here!

Krazy Naoko
3/6/2008 c1 7hollowsmile
this story is so good! you shoud write one about how they fell in love
2/25/2008 c2 Valheru1988
Nice... i love this fic... and i knew Naruto stayed with Itachi as soon as you mentioned the fact that the American branch had an especially good week while Sasuke's office in Japan was bad. lol

Love the fic... hm i want to see Sasuke light Itachi's car on fire :) lol Great fic and keep up the good work on future fics.
2/22/2008 c2 Almost
I liked it! So cute and Sasuke was a little off of his character but it was great!
2/16/2008 c2 yingyingyang
Aww...That's so sweet! The thought of Sasuke setting Itachi's car on fire is halarious.
2/4/2008 c2 11ojuzu
Aw. So cute!

Lilz
2/4/2008 c2 5TooDarnLazy
a really sweet story... :-)

i love how you made Naruto the point of contact for everyone; how he was the one who brought everyone together. that's such a Naruto-ish thing :-) and the way his absence makes everyone grumpy and throws the whole company into hell made me smile, especially the part where Shikamaru gets fired and re-hired every year. that's really funny :-D

it's just so sweet how Sasuke worries and cares so much about Naruto that he gets into a foul mood, and how everything brightens up again when Naruto returns.

i quite like your writing style, though there were a few small mistakes here and there that were probably typos. still, lovely story! :-)

p.s. your Itachi's really cool, too! hahaha XD
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