
11/8/2007 c2
24NICHA
this fanfiction was ok. i just have a few comments.
'harano' must be changed to HARUNO!
^_^
and, i didn't really feel like there was enough of naruto in this story, it seemed too much like somebody explaining how bad work is, but it still was a good story!

this fanfiction was ok. i just have a few comments.
'harano' must be changed to HARUNO!
^_^
and, i didn't really feel like there was enough of naruto in this story, it seemed too much like somebody explaining how bad work is, but it still was a good story!
11/7/2007 c2
29michelerene
What an awesome story! I might just smile the rest of the week because of it. So funny, heartfelt and sweet! I love how the American branch's productivity goes up during that week. This story is going on my favorites for sure.

What an awesome story! I might just smile the rest of the week because of it. So funny, heartfelt and sweet! I love how the American branch's productivity goes up during that week. This story is going on my favorites for sure.