for Waking the Ghost7/22/2021 c20 Guest
Hi! I just love this story and I'm so sad that you haven't uptadet it in so long!
Hi! I just love this story and I'm so sad that you haven't uptadet it in so long!
9/27/2011 c20 Anonymous
This whole story has been really good! Can't wait to read more, so UPDATE! More Sparrowbella! YES!
This whole story has been really good! Can't wait to read more, so UPDATE! More Sparrowbella! YES!
6/27/2011 c20 GALNKAY
Sorry, I'm way too lazy to log in. (:
Yay! Another update. Can't wait for more!
KAY(:
Sorry, I'm way too lazy to log in. (:
Yay! Another update. Can't wait for more!
KAY(:
6/27/2011 c20 
9nineteennintytwo
I loved the three-way sword fight, too... Great chappie! I'm waiting for the reunion between Jack and Belle ;)
9nineteennintytwoI loved the three-way sword fight, too... Great chappie! I'm waiting for the reunion between Jack and Belle ;)
6/26/2011 c19 9galnkay
FINALLY! haha(: puhlease update this soon. It has always been one of my most favorite stories, and now it's finally been updated.
KAY
9galnkayFINALLY! haha(: puhlease update this soon. It has always been one of my most favorite stories, and now it's finally been updated.
KAY
6/26/2011 c19 9nineteennintytwo
YAY! YOU'RE BACK!
I'm guessing you saw OST, then? xD
Loved the update, and I agree; I don't like Bill, either.
Also, just throwing in a bit of advertising here for a friend, if that's allowed? Anyway, she's started writing a story called 'A Kitty and a Sparrow'. Sparrabella implied, and defintely worth a read, but she hasn't had many reviews for it. She's also requesting critique. Could you give it a read and tell her if she needs to improve anything?
However long it takes, I'll be waiting for more :D
9nineteennintytwoYAY! YOU'RE BACK!
I'm guessing you saw OST, then? xD
Loved the update, and I agree; I don't like Bill, either.
Also, just throwing in a bit of advertising here for a friend, if that's allowed? Anyway, she's started writing a story called 'A Kitty and a Sparrow'. Sparrabella implied, and defintely worth a read, but she hasn't had many reviews for it. She's also requesting critique. Could you give it a read and tell her if she needs to improve anything?
However long it takes, I'll be waiting for more :D
7/16/2010 c18 78Heart Torn Out
Please oh please oh please DON'T MAKE ARABELLA FALL BACK IN LOVE WITH BILL!
PLEASE NO!
I THOUGHT YOU BELEIVED IN SPARABELLA!
It was good though! :)
ME: RIght Cara?*remembering* Oh right. I sent Cara on a trip to Magnus... MAKEOVER! bad...though...
Nevermind then.
I'm actually kinda lonely though.
Jase: You have me.
Bartimaeus: ANd me.
Eve: Don;t forget me.
Magnus: ME too.
Me: But you guys aren;t Cara...
If your confused...sorry.
Back to your fic. I loved it. I just want there to be Sparabella cuz I hate Billy's guts' guts' guts when it comes to Arabella.
Peace. And update.
78Heart Torn OutPlease oh please oh please DON'T MAKE ARABELLA FALL BACK IN LOVE WITH BILL!
PLEASE NO!
I THOUGHT YOU BELEIVED IN SPARABELLA!
It was good though! :)
ME: RIght Cara?*remembering* Oh right. I sent Cara on a trip to Magnus... MAKEOVER! bad...though...
Nevermind then.
I'm actually kinda lonely though.
Jase: You have me.
Bartimaeus: ANd me.
Eve: Don;t forget me.
Magnus: ME too.
Me: But you guys aren;t Cara...
If your confused...sorry.
Back to your fic. I loved it. I just want there to be Sparabella cuz I hate Billy's guts' guts' guts when it comes to Arabella.
Peace. And update.
10/12/2009 c18 ILP0420
Heh. Yeah. Poor Bill. xD I was so happy to see this update in my inbox today! I really missed reading this story! The writing is just so spectacular! It's like... like a re-write of PotC like no other! The way you write... it's as if it's an original story instead of a version of the movie. I noticed most author's writing the movie don't capture all the feelings and emotions of all the characters besides the one they've added, if you know what I mean? You do the opposite; you make Will, Bill, Belle and everyone else seem like your OC's and I adore it! :)
Woah, long paragraph xD So where were we...
Great chapter! I am very much happy with it! :) Couldn't be any better, honestly! I love this story so much! Everything you write just makes me want to squeal and hug something. You're amazing. :)
Can't wait for the next update... and Arabella's renunion with Jack xD ... Could wait a bit longer for Lizzie's enterance though *groans* Although Belle's reaction to her could be very interesting indeed... :D Please update soon!
Heh. Yeah. Poor Bill. xD I was so happy to see this update in my inbox today! I really missed reading this story! The writing is just so spectacular! It's like... like a re-write of PotC like no other! The way you write... it's as if it's an original story instead of a version of the movie. I noticed most author's writing the movie don't capture all the feelings and emotions of all the characters besides the one they've added, if you know what I mean? You do the opposite; you make Will, Bill, Belle and everyone else seem like your OC's and I adore it! :)
Woah, long paragraph xD So where were we...
Great chapter! I am very much happy with it! :) Couldn't be any better, honestly! I love this story so much! Everything you write just makes me want to squeal and hug something. You're amazing. :)
Can't wait for the next update... and Arabella's renunion with Jack xD ... Could wait a bit longer for Lizzie's enterance though *groans* Although Belle's reaction to her could be very interesting indeed... :D Please update soon!
10/12/2009 c18 nineteennintytwo
I liked this chapter, even if Arabella didn't have much to say. Please update soon, as I wanna see the reunion between her and Jack!
nineteennintytwo
I liked this chapter, even if Arabella didn't have much to say. Please update soon, as I wanna see the reunion between her and Jack!
nineteennintytwo
10/12/2009 c18 4callieandjack
I feel extremely sorry for Bill at this point. He's sacrficing everything he has for Will.
4callieandjackI feel extremely sorry for Bill at this point. He's sacrficing everything he has for Will.
10/12/2009 c16 callieandjack
Poor Bill. That had to be a difficult choice to make. Great job though! :P ;)
Poor Bill. That had to be a difficult choice to make. Great job though! :P ;)