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9/10/2016 c1 5LdyJulanna
I could see that
10/25/2010 c1 36francis2
I've certainly enjoyed re-reading this, but it seems that every other sentence a part is missing. Something went wrong here.
11/10/2008 c1 319Copper's Mama
very good story. i think you captured both of their personalities exactly ... kudos.
10/30/2008 c1 toria515
I think I would have liked your story if I hadn't been so irritated and confused. You've left out so many words that it's like listening to a telephone call where half the words are dropped. Please edit. You have a lot of potential.
8/4/2008 c1 8Cameron3012
Now why couldn't they have done that in the show? =(

Great story. Love it. =D
3/3/2008 c1 Redlioness62
This sure could have used at least 2 more chapters.
1/25/2008 c1 Synera
O! Love it. I know it's a oneshot but ever consider expanding it a little to show how difficult it might be for them to pull off there plan?
1/20/2008 c1 24go.suck.on.a.lemon
Excellent! *sigh* now I can be all happy about that night, it was so disappointing when they implied nothing on the show. :P
12/30/2007 c1 Fenris242
I LOVED THIS! it couldn't have been written better...excellent smut, with a decent epilogue...any chance at a continuation?

-Fen
12/15/2007 c1 13xxxTrojan-Princessxxx
hey that was awesome! i have only seen the first episode as it has only just begun airing over here but this was really good well done!

p.s. sorry about there not being any capitals, i am writing this really quickly, lol.
12/10/2007 c1 xosummerxo
VERY GOOD STORY. I ENJOYED READING IT. PLEASE WRITE MORE.
12/3/2007 c1 5Dreams of Centaurs
You wrote it just like it really would be. Great job!
11/28/2007 c1 21Velvet Storm
I'm a newcomer to Moonlight, I will admit. I've never been a big vampire person. But I love the show and this fanfic is very good! He IS hot isn't he? He'd make me change my mind about vampires in a heartbeat! Well written descriptions I'd like to add.
11/27/2007 c1 37Jurojin
Woot! Love vampire smut! Was great, give us more.
11/23/2007 c1 kelley
I just wanted to say that I absolutly loved the story. Keep up the good work. I hope that they keep moonlight on the air, so we can see more of Mick and Beth...

Kelley
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