for Future Interference11/27/2007 c2 
8Orefish
The first paragraph was hard to read. Some of the words seemed a little repetitive but I think I get what’s going on. I think it’s cute that they say “dusted” at the same time; it shows a more playful side. As for the Japanese bits, they’re all right but I don’t think a princess would shorten “gomenasai” to “gomen” since it’s not a polite term. Gomen would be better used for an everyday joe talking to an acquaintance. Their verbs are like that too. Anyways, onto 3. :D
8OrefishThe first paragraph was hard to read. Some of the words seemed a little repetitive but I think I get what’s going on. I think it’s cute that they say “dusted” at the same time; it shows a more playful side. As for the Japanese bits, they’re all right but I don’t think a princess would shorten “gomenasai” to “gomen” since it’s not a polite term. Gomen would be better used for an everyday joe talking to an acquaintance. Their verbs are like that too. Anyways, onto 3. :D
11/27/2007 c1 Orefish
Hey this is really fantastic. Cosmos has to be my favorite senshi, only because she's so mysterious. It's great to watch how other people interpret her. I like to think that sailor moon’s final form isn’t a happy one as well. I guess that’s why I feel compelled to read more. :D
Hey this is really fantastic. Cosmos has to be my favorite senshi, only because she's so mysterious. It's great to watch how other people interpret her. I like to think that sailor moon’s final form isn’t a happy one as well. I guess that’s why I feel compelled to read more. :D
11/15/2007 c2 5Aleric
Aha, so Cosmos will be playing the role of mentor to the hidden Princess persona. Sort of like a big sister. Makes me wonder about all the times when Usagi was scared or confused during a battle. But when the moment called, she was able to deliver. Maybe that was Cosmos giving her a little morale boost.
5AlericAha, so Cosmos will be playing the role of mentor to the hidden Princess persona. Sort of like a big sister. Makes me wonder about all the times when Usagi was scared or confused during a battle. But when the moment called, she was able to deliver. Maybe that was Cosmos giving her a little morale boost.
11/10/2007 c1 Aleric
I presume from the statement at the end of this chapter that this takes place before Usagi and the others find out she is the reincarnated Princess. If it is, I can see why it would be forbidened for her to interact with them. Their focus should be on finding the Princess. What will they do when their leader becomes the avatar not of a Princess, but of a Goddess? And when she is forced to leave, will they be able to stand it? She could possibly, though totally unintentionally, seduce the others into abandoning their destinies
I presume from the statement at the end of this chapter that this takes place before Usagi and the others find out she is the reincarnated Princess. If it is, I can see why it would be forbidened for her to interact with them. Their focus should be on finding the Princess. What will they do when their leader becomes the avatar not of a Princess, but of a Goddess? And when she is forced to leave, will they be able to stand it? She could possibly, though totally unintentionally, seduce the others into abandoning their destinies