for The Lord is my Secret10/16/2012 c8 kerrie
It's really coming together, can't wait for me.
Btw I'm loving most of your LoK stories : D
Hope to read a new chapter to one of them soon :D
It's really coming together, can't wait for me.
Btw I'm loving most of your LoK stories : D
Hope to read a new chapter to one of them soon :D
7/9/2011 c8 
8The Grim Reeper
Hey there, Lil V! Great chapter! Poor Raziel, he's suffered a lot in this chapter. As I was reading it, I could almost feel their wounds :S It's good to see the kind side of Dumah in the end. It's amazing how much of an impact that an act of kindness will do to change someone. Raz is so brave. It was a great read, looking forward to seeing more! Keep up the great work!
~Grim
8The Grim ReeperHey there, Lil V! Great chapter! Poor Raziel, he's suffered a lot in this chapter. As I was reading it, I could almost feel their wounds :S It's good to see the kind side of Dumah in the end. It's amazing how much of an impact that an act of kindness will do to change someone. Raz is so brave. It was a great read, looking forward to seeing more! Keep up the great work!
~Grim
7/8/2011 c8 8ArchangelCorps
I'm actually rather surprised it's been so long since the last update... it doesn't feel like that long. Anyway, I could've squealed when I saw this in my inbox. Just as good as before and I'm suddenly inclined to go play Legacy Of Kain. Can't wait to read more. (PS, this is Shepherd Eyeshine- reviewed before, but changed accounts since then, y'know?)
8ArchangelCorpsI'm actually rather surprised it's been so long since the last update... it doesn't feel like that long. Anyway, I could've squealed when I saw this in my inbox. Just as good as before and I'm suddenly inclined to go play Legacy Of Kain. Can't wait to read more. (PS, this is Shepherd Eyeshine- reviewed before, but changed accounts since then, y'know?)
5/4/2010 c7 8The Grim Reeper
You know, I'm still going to the bottom LEFT corner to review, lol. The way FF has changed things, it's gonna take a while to get used to it. Can't wait for the next chappy :D
8The Grim ReeperYou know, I'm still going to the bottom LEFT corner to review, lol. The way FF has changed things, it's gonna take a while to get used to it. Can't wait for the next chappy :D
9/22/2009 c1 1Anarchived
This is amazing! It's so cool how you wrote about Sarafan Raziel; most people don't! I can't wait to read more! it really felt like I was reading a book! Your characters jumped off the page!
1AnarchivedThis is amazing! It's so cool how you wrote about Sarafan Raziel; most people don't! I can't wait to read more! it really felt like I was reading a book! Your characters jumped off the page!
8/3/2009 c7 2Azura Soul Reaver
That was great! I'm glad someone has actually updated one of my favorite stories!
2Azura Soul ReaverThat was great! I'm glad someone has actually updated one of my favorite stories!
8/2/2009 c7 Shepherd Eyeshine
You're kiddin', right? This whole story's interesting, so the next chapter cannot help but to be the same. -Grin- Anyway, yeah. This was a good chapter. Can't wait for the next!
You're kiddin', right? This whole story's interesting, so the next chapter cannot help but to be the same. -Grin- Anyway, yeah. This was a good chapter. Can't wait for the next!
9/12/2008 c6 35Clement Rage
Nice! Sorry about my last review. Anyway, interesting start to the tournament. I like the way you actually had Raz get beaten up instead of just cruising through. The next rounds will be fun. The chapter title was 'hand to hand combat', so do they start using weapons now?
Surely he's not going to fight Zephon in only the second round, is he? He has to become a general too! Unless he comes back next year?
Anyway, great tournament start. Don't worry about the fights, you're doing fine. I'd like to say update soon, but I can't, because I never do with my fics. So any keep it up and good luck!
35Clement RageNice! Sorry about my last review. Anyway, interesting start to the tournament. I like the way you actually had Raz get beaten up instead of just cruising through. The next rounds will be fun. The chapter title was 'hand to hand combat', so do they start using weapons now?
Surely he's not going to fight Zephon in only the second round, is he? He has to become a general too! Unless he comes back next year?
Anyway, great tournament start. Don't worry about the fights, you're doing fine. I'd like to say update soon, but I can't, because I never do with my fics. So any keep it up and good luck!
9/9/2008 c6 Shepherd Eyeshine
Good chapter, good chapter... I really enjoyed that. Can't wait for the next. Oh and in response to the end bit... I don't have any idea but this would just be a wild guess so maybe Zephon? -Shrug- Just thought I'd throw in a random guess haha.XDAnyway here's to another good chapter in a great story!
Good chapter, good chapter... I really enjoyed that. Can't wait for the next. Oh and in response to the end bit... I don't have any idea but this would just be a wild guess so maybe Zephon? -Shrug- Just thought I'd throw in a random guess haha.XDAnyway here's to another good chapter in a great story!
9/9/2008 c6 9CallMeBlind
Oh your efforts are well noted! That was an awesome chapter. The fight scene rocked! I liked it a bunch.
As for who he;s going to meet next, I would guess either Zephon or Rahab. (Rahab due to all the blue around)
Please, keep the updates!
9CallMeBlindOh your efforts are well noted! That was an awesome chapter. The fight scene rocked! I liked it a bunch.
As for who he;s going to meet next, I would guess either Zephon or Rahab. (Rahab due to all the blue around)
Please, keep the updates!