for Who's Back?12/20/2010 c16 powerofmicrofibre
I just about died when i realised just how much of the story there is left. i mena, wow. BUT ITS SOOO AWESOME! Im just praying that you dont overdo it and write to much dribble to fill in space, cause at the moment i love you, and i wouldnt want our love to go to waste cause an awesome story was ruined from random storyness that ruins it. I trust you. Keep fly, and ill keep reading!
I just about died when i realised just how much of the story there is left. i mena, wow. BUT ITS SOOO AWESOME! Im just praying that you dont overdo it and write to much dribble to fill in space, cause at the moment i love you, and i wouldnt want our love to go to waste cause an awesome story was ruined from random storyness that ruins it. I trust you. Keep fly, and ill keep reading!
12/15/2010 c47 
2uniquegirl
Yay! I finally finished it! Though it's kind of sad when I realized that it already ended but, oh well, it was one hell of a story! Anyway, I was wondering about what Sasuke's tattoos were; either I missed reading it or it really wasn't there, the kanji on his hip and the one on his right ankle. Can you please tell me what you had in mind or what you have written (in case it really was there and I just missed reading that part)? Please, oh please? ^_^
2uniquegirlYay! I finally finished it! Though it's kind of sad when I realized that it already ended but, oh well, it was one hell of a story! Anyway, I was wondering about what Sasuke's tattoos were; either I missed reading it or it really wasn't there, the kanji on his hip and the one on his right ankle. Can you please tell me what you had in mind or what you have written (in case it really was there and I just missed reading that part)? Please, oh please? ^_^
12/14/2010 c10 20Conejo-sama
I wish Akina just dig up a hole, jump in it, and bury herself. She shouldn't be talking when she hadn't been around her son in like 2 years! Ppl like her make me so angry!
I liked it when Seto jumped in Sakura's arms instead of Akina's. Burn!
20Conejo-samaI wish Akina just dig up a hole, jump in it, and bury herself. She shouldn't be talking when she hadn't been around her son in like 2 years! Ppl like her make me so angry!
I liked it when Seto jumped in Sakura's arms instead of Akina's. Burn!
12/13/2010 c7 Conejo-sama
I hate when adults think they know everything; they always get too bombastic.
I hate when adults think they know everything; they always get too bombastic.
12/3/2010 c6 Conejo-sama
Aw! What a sweet ending for this chapter. It was still unusual to see Sasuke acting human though.
Aw! What a sweet ending for this chapter. It was still unusual to see Sasuke acting human though.
11/16/2010 c47 1Lupita12
Hello my name is Lupi and i fell in love with your fan-fic.
Once i read it i couldn't stop and would read till it was late at night ^_^
I started to cry when Sasuke left and Sakura was crying and i was just crying super bad XD haha
but every detail about it made me love it so much and im like happy with how it turned out :D
at first when it said sasuke passed out unconcious i thought for sure he was dead and started to cry and wished he didnt die but he didn't so i was happy :D
well yeah this story is amazing and so far its my #1 favorite :D
keep up the great work :)
Sincerely,
Lupi :)
1Lupita12Hello my name is Lupi and i fell in love with your fan-fic.
Once i read it i couldn't stop and would read till it was late at night ^_^
I started to cry when Sasuke left and Sakura was crying and i was just crying super bad XD haha
but every detail about it made me love it so much and im like happy with how it turned out :D
at first when it said sasuke passed out unconcious i thought for sure he was dead and started to cry and wished he didnt die but he didn't so i was happy :D
well yeah this story is amazing and so far its my #1 favorite :D
keep up the great work :)
Sincerely,
Lupi :)
11/14/2010 c47 welllllll
Oh. My. Gosh.
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I LOVE YOUR STORY, I LOVE IT SO MUCH! I LOVE IT! IT WAS SO CUTE, SAD, HAPPY, AND AMAZING AT THE SAME TIME! I LOVE IT!
AWWWWWWWWW...
SO CUTE.
KEEP WRITING! YOUR STORIES ARE A-M-A-ZING!
Oh. My. Gosh.
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I LOVE YOUR STORY, I LOVE IT SO MUCH! I LOVE IT! IT WAS SO CUTE, SAD, HAPPY, AND AMAZING AT THE SAME TIME! I LOVE IT!
AWWWWWWWWW...
SO CUTE.
KEEP WRITING! YOUR STORIES ARE A-M-A-ZING!
10/28/2010 c46 Itachi-San2194
part 2 (my psp wouldnt let me put anymore). the ending sounded a little akward in the way it was written. and i thought you did pretty well writing the fight scene. one of my favorite parts was in the beginning when sasukes out and sakura is home alone with seto and they have the noodle fight. i've started reading the sequel. i had a feeling that she'd be having twins. i've just recently noticed that most fanfiction authors tend to update in the middle of the night. think thats it if not then chpter 45!
part 2 (my psp wouldnt let me put anymore). the ending sounded a little akward in the way it was written. and i thought you did pretty well writing the fight scene. one of my favorite parts was in the beginning when sasukes out and sakura is home alone with seto and they have the noodle fight. i've started reading the sequel. i had a feeling that she'd be having twins. i've just recently noticed that most fanfiction authors tend to update in the middle of the night. think thats it if not then chpter 45!
10/28/2010 c47 Itachi-San2194
hmm, how should i start? well i just thought i should let you know that your fanfiction made me lose a lot of sleep in the past three days. though there are some faults i think i fell in love with your story. two things i really couldn't get used to were how sasuke and sakura kept calling eachother babe and love. the other thing i could'nt get used to was the way sasuke and itachi were after itachi told him everything. your grammar mistakes bugged me to no end but i understand how and why it was happening.
hmm, how should i start? well i just thought i should let you know that your fanfiction made me lose a lot of sleep in the past three days. though there are some faults i think i fell in love with your story. two things i really couldn't get used to were how sasuke and sakura kept calling eachother babe and love. the other thing i could'nt get used to was the way sasuke and itachi were after itachi told him everything. your grammar mistakes bugged me to no end but i understand how and why it was happening.
10/15/2010 c17 mUmaRhz
bahahahahahaha use protection! bahahahahahaha sooo should use his own advice! but the ending was soooo kracked!
bahahahahahaha use protection! bahahahahahaha sooo should use his own advice! but the ending was soooo kracked!
9/26/2010 c7 2TheBlondChick
Oh My God! I cannot believe that Sakura's dad would say something like than. I bet her mother was embaressed, if I were her, I would have taken his plate and shoved the food in his face screaming "SHUT UP!" at the same time. Great, it was just awesome!
2TheBlondChickOh My God! I cannot believe that Sakura's dad would say something like than. I bet her mother was embaressed, if I were her, I would have taken his plate and shoved the food in his face screaming "SHUT UP!" at the same time. Great, it was just awesome!
9/20/2010 c47 5Gilded Rose
Very nice story.
A great one to be honestly.
I love all the turns and new characters
showing up. And the plot itself was very
structured and well thought.
But I still don't know what kanji Sasuke
has on his hip. Can you tell me? ;)
Looking forward to read more from you.
See ya
5Gilded RoseVery nice story.
A great one to be honestly.
I love all the turns and new characters
showing up. And the plot itself was very
structured and well thought.
But I still don't know what kanji Sasuke
has on his hip. Can you tell me? ;)
Looking forward to read more from you.
See ya