for Who's Back?3/6/2018 c17 
1theeuniverse
I know you wanted to make Ino a likeable character here (I mean everybody’s likeable) but seriously! She’s annoying the heck out of me. Why is she always in their place? Or Naruto? Can they have their own privacy? Anyway kudos. I’m halfway (sort of) and I’m hoping for more favourable moments without crazy people interrupting Sakura and Sasuke.
1theeuniverseI know you wanted to make Ino a likeable character here (I mean everybody’s likeable) but seriously! She’s annoying the heck out of me. Why is she always in their place? Or Naruto? Can they have their own privacy? Anyway kudos. I’m halfway (sort of) and I’m hoping for more favourable moments without crazy people interrupting Sakura and Sasuke.
11/9/2017 c1 Uchiha.Heiress.S
Hahaha this baby’s gonna be a monster still not out in the world and kickin’ already haha
Hahaha this baby’s gonna be a monster still not out in the world and kickin’ already haha
8/24/2017 c47 Via
AAAAAAAAA️️️️
I love this sooo much
AAAAAAAAA️️️️
I love this sooo much
7/8/2017 c32 ikkilove
i reaallyyyyyy love ur fic so much
i reaallyyyyyy love ur fic so much
5/18/2017 c47 Larisha
Type your review like wow like OMG Im was one of the best stories I have ever read in my entire are an excellent writter and all I can tell you is you should carry on writting.I wish you nothing but happiness and OMG I still have so much to say to you,like almost a are good at what you do and all I have to say is goodluck for the future ya know and may GOD bless you.:D
Type your review like wow like OMG Im was one of the best stories I have ever read in my entire are an excellent writter and all I can tell you is you should carry on writting.I wish you nothing but happiness and OMG I still have so much to say to you,like almost a are good at what you do and all I have to say is goodluck for the future ya know and may GOD bless you.:D
1/30/2017 c36 Niki
GOOOD I didn't cry like this in such a long time and I am realy afraid to read next chapters. But sure I will, this story is realy great. Please don't let anyone die...
GOOOD I didn't cry like this in such a long time and I am realy afraid to read next chapters. But sure I will, this story is realy great. Please don't let anyone die...
1/14/2017 c29 monsuno power
I cant stop is cheeks hurts,You are so good at to read you soon.
I cant stop is cheeks hurts,You are so good at to read you soon.
10/31/2016 c1 poisonous.love22
I cannot tell you how much I adore this story. It is genuinely one of the best things I have ever, ever read and I'm being completely truthful. Its well written, the story line is amazing and it continued to keep me hooked the entire time. You should be incredibly proud of this, it's phenomenal.
I cannot tell you how much I adore this story. It is genuinely one of the best things I have ever, ever read and I'm being completely truthful. Its well written, the story line is amazing and it continued to keep me hooked the entire time. You should be incredibly proud of this, it's phenomenal.
9/14/2016 c46 Jefy
I think the story was nice and expressed many sweet and bitter emotions. But, there were some things that bugged me throughout the story linelack of privacy in the house. There was always someone in the house. I mean, normally, even best friends wouldn't want to be third wheel in their friend's married life. But in this case, no one actually seemed to care about giving any privacy to the couple. And the other thing that I thought was out of place, would beSeto and Sakura's bonding. The story greatly lacked in real bonding between the two. I don't even get it, how come Seto became Mommy's Boy, when all I ever noticed was, him being with one of the girl's in the house. It was always Ino who dropped him or picked him from Daycare. It just didn't make sense for me to think about Seto being closer to Sakura. But then again, it all comes down to the lack of privacy in the house. If she had more private moments with the kids, the bonding would've shown better. Anyways, the story was really sweet and I enjoyed reading it a lot. Yes, there were several errors, but that's okay, I understand it happens a lot with writers. Thank you for putting your efforts in this sweet fiction.
I think the story was nice and expressed many sweet and bitter emotions. But, there were some things that bugged me throughout the story linelack of privacy in the house. There was always someone in the house. I mean, normally, even best friends wouldn't want to be third wheel in their friend's married life. But in this case, no one actually seemed to care about giving any privacy to the couple. And the other thing that I thought was out of place, would beSeto and Sakura's bonding. The story greatly lacked in real bonding between the two. I don't even get it, how come Seto became Mommy's Boy, when all I ever noticed was, him being with one of the girl's in the house. It was always Ino who dropped him or picked him from Daycare. It just didn't make sense for me to think about Seto being closer to Sakura. But then again, it all comes down to the lack of privacy in the house. If she had more private moments with the kids, the bonding would've shown better. Anyways, the story was really sweet and I enjoyed reading it a lot. Yes, there were several errors, but that's okay, I understand it happens a lot with writers. Thank you for putting your efforts in this sweet fiction.
8/1/2016 c47 Ann
Loved your story. Great job!
Loved your story. Great job!
7/20/2016 c35 Fiona
I don't usually comment on stories that are complete and from at least 6 years ago, but this chapter was beautifully written. I don't know if you still read these messages or even still write but I had to comment on this chapter because it reminded me of Anne of Green Gables when she gets married to Gilbert. That series was very influential in my life and brings back tons of memories during that period. And I feel that when writers can capture emotions from other people's memories with out even knowing it, are truly masters of writing :) hope you still write and make amazing stories.
P.s I still am going to comment at the end like usually do, but I just had to comment on this chapter:)
I don't usually comment on stories that are complete and from at least 6 years ago, but this chapter was beautifully written. I don't know if you still read these messages or even still write but I had to comment on this chapter because it reminded me of Anne of Green Gables when she gets married to Gilbert. That series was very influential in my life and brings back tons of memories during that period. And I feel that when writers can capture emotions from other people's memories with out even knowing it, are truly masters of writing :) hope you still write and make amazing stories.
P.s I still am going to comment at the end like usually do, but I just had to comment on this chapter:)
5/24/2016 c1 who.am.I.2000
I just finished reading this story and I am deeply impressed. I loved the characterization you gave Sasuke, Sakura, Naruto, and specially Ino. Normally, people make Sasuke emo, Sakura too emotional, Naruto stupid, and Ino plain annoying, but you made them really loveable. It had a few misspelled words and grammatical errors, but that can only improve with time. Great job!
I just finished reading this story and I am deeply impressed. I loved the characterization you gave Sasuke, Sakura, Naruto, and specially Ino. Normally, people make Sasuke emo, Sakura too emotional, Naruto stupid, and Ino plain annoying, but you made them really loveable. It had a few misspelled words and grammatical errors, but that can only improve with time. Great job!