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8/13/2012 c1 13AnimeWolf56
god, this is HILARIOUS! made my day XD
7/24/2010 c1 i-am-mitsuki
I love the last part where Ed is like al I'll save you!
2/17/2010 c1 Drayomi
This is hilarious! :D

I wonder what armstrong is doing to Al? ;3
4/13/2008 c1 FLsilverwolf
that was a funny story i loved it.
12/30/2007 c1 4ice-avenger
lol! i couldnt stop laughing! i think it's so funny! especially how ed gave al as a "present" to the iron blood alchemist^^ i cant believe they let a minor get drunk tsk tsk tsk^^ lol great story!
12/1/2007 c1 66Ayumi Elric
XD Wtf, lmao...that was slightly distubing, but awesome XD
11/28/2007 c1 1Elric Roxana
OMFG! can't stop laughing... =))

Sh!t this dang funny! LOL...

Congrats, it's a really good one!

See ya!
11/14/2007 c1 2moonshine-blade
OMFG THAT'S AMAZING! *dies laughing* oh my god that's one of the funniest things i've ever read XD

~~moonshine
11/11/2007 c1 40Bar-Ohki
Dear god...
11/11/2007 c1 8edPod
Poor Al. XD this was hilarious. Especially Mustang's hair.
11/11/2007 c1 41MoldyMoo
1. Add a little bit more detailing here and there.

Ed snarled angrily through clenched teeth as he opened the door to South H.Q.

2. KEEP IT PAST TENSE. How many books do you read that say: "He stumbles off into another seat. He looks up to see Mustang on Armstrong’s lap stroking his mustache and whispering into his ear." Nevertheless, I think that's the only time you did it in this fic. So kudos on that.

3. Did I mention details?

Yes. WHOPPER! WHOPPER NO ONION! pickles...bun seeds...ice...sweet and sour sauce...

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