for Je t'aime8/7/2008 c4 
9Yoshiyuki Ly
lol "you're global warming." Never thought of that one. I don't think it's crap, but I think you should continue :)
9Yoshiyuki Lylol "you're global warming." Never thought of that one. I don't think it's crap, but I think you should continue :)
5/8/2008 c4 1Nongarak
I like these stories, I really do, but you are totally butchering Fleur's accent. It isn't so much the t's the cant pronounce, but the h's. You should check the book out, or talk to a French person.
1NongarakI like these stories, I really do, but you are totally butchering Fleur's accent. It isn't so much the t's the cant pronounce, but the h's. You should check the book out, or talk to a French person.
3/29/2008 c4 42CTPP
It's not really presented as well as the other chapters.
But your style is improving and you have some wonderful ideas. Try evolving them into short fics?
Please do something like that with the eyes, it's a wonderful concept.
42CTPPIt's not really presented as well as the other chapters.
But your style is improving and you have some wonderful ideas. Try evolving them into short fics?
Please do something like that with the eyes, it's a wonderful concept.
3/29/2008 c3 CTPP
Fifteen? That is a bit young.
Again, not so sure with this one... Especially Fleur's speech.
But I do love the idea of her eyes changing depending on how she feels.
Fifteen? That is a bit young.
Again, not so sure with this one... Especially Fleur's speech.
But I do love the idea of her eyes changing depending on how she feels.
2/9/2008 c4 Windforce
Hi
great story, I like the part about global warming lol.
I was wondering if you wanted me to tell you about the mistakes made in French since it if my maternal language. But I have to tell you that most of them are used correctly though.
So Je t'aimé is not good, it is je t'aime. In past tense is Je t'aimais. Understood is compris although comprendz may be clearer for people that don't know any French. do you understand would be, comprends-tu. Not comprend alone.
moin cherie.. ma chérie? I don't understand that sentence.
to moi, that is not a mistake that a French speaker would do since the word order is not the same.
I hope this can be useful.
good luck
Hi
great story, I like the part about global warming lol.
I was wondering if you wanted me to tell you about the mistakes made in French since it if my maternal language. But I have to tell you that most of them are used correctly though.
So Je t'aimé is not good, it is je t'aime. In past tense is Je t'aimais. Understood is compris although comprendz may be clearer for people that don't know any French. do you understand would be, comprends-tu. Not comprend alone.
moin cherie.. ma chérie? I don't understand that sentence.
to moi, that is not a mistake that a French speaker would do since the word order is not the same.
I hope this can be useful.
good luck
1/30/2008 c4 etudie la francais
um. a little lame. moin? was that a typo?*ma
um. a little lame. moin? was that a typo?*ma
1/7/2008 c3 fotcdelacour
That is great! Tis a great idea. And to have Hermione bolder than Fleur strangely worked. And I dont know who first came up with the idea of Fleur's eyes changing colour when aroused but that is a great idea too. I love it. Hope you write more like this.
That is great! Tis a great idea. And to have Hermione bolder than Fleur strangely worked. And I dont know who first came up with the idea of Fleur's eyes changing colour when aroused but that is a great idea too. I love it. Hope you write more like this.
1/7/2008 c3 chibichoco
Hahahaha... amazing. Loved it! XD ... hehehe... Thinking sure can be fun... *starts thinking* ;)
Hahahaha... amazing. Loved it! XD ... hehehe... Thinking sure can be fun... *starts thinking* ;)
12/17/2007 c2 5for-the-good-to-come
I love this chapter... it is super well written and sweet and funny, and so true... : )
5for-the-good-to-comeI love this chapter... it is super well written and sweet and funny, and so true... : )