for The Interupted Date6/1/2011 c1 
1DevilsGoddess
Oh I cried when I read this. Leo's a jerk. But that part where Chris almost died and he and Bianca told each other they loved them it was like so sad! oh great story.
1DevilsGoddessOh I cried when I read this. Leo's a jerk. But that part where Chris almost died and he and Bianca told each other they loved them it was like so sad! oh great story.
12/1/2008 c1 Lilli
Great job on this one also. Leo's such a jerk. Do you think you could do a story when Leo realizes what he's doing?
Great job on this one also. Leo's such a jerk. Do you think you could do a story when Leo realizes what he's doing?
3/17/2008 c1 WickedNut
Hi. I just left a review for the prequel (sp?) to this. "Ow!" *rubs shoulder and glares angrily* Well, my cousin Ashley and I left a review.
As we said before:
FREAKINGING Awesome!
Please write more stories! You're a great writer.
And yes, I was almost crying at the end, and Ashley is sniffling.
And...she hit me again. Great.
Well, I love her anyway. And we both love your story!
Jenna and Ashley
Hi. I just left a review for the prequel (sp?) to this. "Ow!" *rubs shoulder and glares angrily* Well, my cousin Ashley and I left a review.
As we said before:
FREAKINGING Awesome!
Please write more stories! You're a great writer.
And yes, I was almost crying at the end, and Ashley is sniffling.
And...she hit me again. Great.
Well, I love her anyway. And we both love your story!
Jenna and Ashley
12/3/2007 c1 4Warriora
This is good, too :). I like the little clues like, "not knowing someone was watching him," and "not knowing that this could be the last time he would use his powers." Pretty sweet.
4WarrioraThis is good, too :). I like the little clues like, "not knowing someone was watching him," and "not knowing that this could be the last time he would use his powers." Pretty sweet.
11/15/2007 c1 11goldacharmed
please know that the very last thing i want to do is to be rude. so i hope this doesnt hurt your feelings. the fact that Bianca sings isnt the best idea and nother is the fact that its a miley Cyrus couse Bianca is into more of a goth stile judging by her attatude and choose of what to weair. but other than that one thing i though that its was very good and i hope you finish the story and im now going to read the first part ps again i hope i wasnt to rude please tell me if i was
11goldacharmedplease know that the very last thing i want to do is to be rude. so i hope this doesnt hurt your feelings. the fact that Bianca sings isnt the best idea and nother is the fact that its a miley Cyrus couse Bianca is into more of a goth stile judging by her attatude and choose of what to weair. but other than that one thing i though that its was very good and i hope you finish the story and im now going to read the first part ps again i hope i wasnt to rude please tell me if i was