for Life was cruel
111/20/2007 c1 El
liked the story a lot! good work.
liked the story a lot! good work.
11/19/2007 c1 ryan.lover.19
okay... dont even tell me you cant write smut scenes because, that scene totally gave me a picture of R/M in the tiki hut in the actual episode. it depicted their love so beautifully. but marissa preg with trey's kid? ew. you have to write a diff end. i will not have it. it would be too sad.
okay... dont even tell me you cant write smut scenes because, that scene totally gave me a picture of R/M in the tiki hut in the actual episode. it depicted their love so beautifully. but marissa preg with trey's kid? ew. you have to write a diff end. i will not have it. it would be too sad.
11/19/2007 c1 Ally
AH! Surprise ending! I loved it, I think that if you can you should keep writing. This is one of the best fics I've read and I think it should be more than one chapter!
AH! Surprise ending! I loved it, I think that if you can you should keep writing. This is one of the best fics I've read and I think it should be more than one chapter!
11/18/2007 c1 the oc is my life
oh my freaking God! unbelievable! you have to write more.
oh my freaking God! unbelievable! you have to write more.
11/18/2007 c1 areil2010
Great one-shot, although I wish it were more.
OMG! Marissa's pregnant with Trey's kid, unbelievable.
Post soon, hopefully=]
Great one-shot, although I wish it were more.
OMG! Marissa's pregnant with Trey's kid, unbelievable.
Post soon, hopefully=]