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12/11/2007 c10 3ThePassionOfTheRose
WoW! This was good!

Yeah, I saw Holiday in Handcuffs. The only thing that I thought was kinda...inappropriate was her bro being gay. I don't hate homeosexuals, it's just... WOAH! 0.o
12/11/2007 c9 ThePassionOfTheRose
0.o really? One HOUR?
12/10/2007 c9 22XxNightfirexX
Oh no! Poor terrence...

~XxNFxX
12/9/2007 c9 54Harry Potter Fan 1994
GASP I hope Kori's okay! What happened to her? Was it the smoke? Slade needs to have pie smashed in his face...Tamaranian pie!

Great chapter!
12/2/2007 c8 22XxNightfirexX
My SISTER loves that show. Sorry I didn't review last chapter, I don't know why I didn't. Anyway, great chapter today!

~XxNFxX
12/2/2007 c8 54Harry Potter Fan 1994
Bonding time! *claps* how cute! I loved Terrance's second to last line 'If you want Richard to be my dad, I'd be okay with that.' That was touching :) Update soon please! Great chapter :)
11/26/2007 c7 3ThePassionOfTheRose
No spelling errors, but a lot of grammical error.

1) "They were perfect for each other, together the 3 of us were inseparable."

This should be: "They were perfect for each other. Together, the three of us were inseparable."

2)
11/26/2007 c7 22XxNightfirexX
Can't wait to see what happens!

~XxNFxX
11/24/2007 c6 3ThePassionOfTheRose
1) Too many grammical errors! ARE YOU SURE YOU DON'T WANT/NEED AN EDITOR!

2) You should change the rating to T or M, because lil kids don't know what 'rape' means.

3) TOO MANY GRAMMICAL ERRORS!
11/24/2007 c5 ThePassionOfTheRose
This sounds kinda clichè...

They sound like teenagers...

Are you SURE you don't need an editor?
11/24/2007 c6 22XxNightfirexX
Oh. My. God.

Out of all the things...wow.

I'm...not entirely sure where you're going with this but you've gotten me hooked!

~XxNFxX
11/24/2007 c4 3ThePassionOfTheRose
Since they're police officers, wouldn't it be smart to use, oh I dont know, A GUN!
11/24/2007 c5 22XxNightfirexX
Not Slade!

*Cue Jaws theme song*

~XxNFxX
11/23/2007 c5 54Harry Potter Fan 1994
YAY! They kissed!

NO! Slade saw!

I'm torn...

BUt thanks for updtaing so fast! :)
11/23/2007 c4 22XxNightfirexX
Um...in the nect chapter...they...shall meet a fairy princess and go to the royal ball and-

...wait a minute...

...that's cinderella...

Um, how about Richard tries to soften Kori up so that Gar can finish his paperwork. but he finds himself in some strange/embarrassing situation?

Okay, anyway, I loved this chapter. Very good. You might want to get someone to help you with th grammar, though.
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