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1/17/2013 c1 Guest
you only have 2 reviews and both of them are just critiques; you should have more than that. This was very well done. Its a beautiful poem. I honestly loved it
11/20/2007 c1 94LesMisLoony
"And smiled in spite of my outburst of crass."

Crassness? Maybe?

It's a very interesting poem, though there are a couple of rhymes that are almost Seussian. Word to the other reviewer's question about the French. Still, it had some lovely imagery. Do hope to see more from you soon, and welcome to the fandom!
11/20/2007 c1 Jenny
'Il est ne sont pas bons' doesn't make any sense- 'it/he isn't are not good (with 'good' in the plural)- if you decide you do want to translate` the whole thing into French- a laudable ambition- I'd recommend you find a good beta who can help you with your french.

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