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4/29/2019 c1 5Professor Slaad
A little short, but I really liked it. Also, in response to your query about "Old Maid", spinster means the same thing but is considered less perjorative.
11/22/2007 c1 2ultimatemonkey32
awesome story! its nothing that ive ever seen before! keep writing!
11/20/2007 c1 59Angel Peach Blossom
It's no problem at all. I like helping other people.

I can tell that this is better. There are a couple added characters, and now the right name is used, so that's a plus.

Again, for a first story, this isn't bad at all.
11/20/2007 c1 Rapid-Starr
This was a pretty good story. The idea behind this was certainly something I hadn't seen before, so good job there! It was interesting to see just what might have happened In Mineral Town if the main character had never arrived.

My only nit pick with your story was that I felt that you could have added a lot more depth. Perhaps you could have had him experiance this alternate life for several days. This way he could encounter all the residents and see in greater depth and detail just what their lives, as well as the town had become. Only then does he realize just how wonderful his life really is.

Overall, I liked your story and hope to see more from you soon.

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