for Who Gets the Last Laugh9/28/2008 c1 
10Salty Q
"“any more pranks and I see lots of shiny sharp weapon and lots of cross country running in your futures” Sam and Dean started to look innocent then."
This made me chuckle out loud! Brilliant.
"Dean called over to Sam “this is good at least now I don’t have to smell the shower after you’ve used it.” Sam retorted” at least I don’t have to listen to you while you sing while you’re out here.”"
Haha! You write the boys' humor well. I have a tiny suggestion, as I see you welcome them. When different characters speak, it is more clear if there is a new paragraph each time. I can tell who is talking, but it tends to make the paragraphs really long. (I kept losing my place. LOL!)
I like how stern you write John in this one. I really felt like he must just be fed up with the boys' silliness. :)
I like how they are both planning their next move at the same time. Such cunning little Winchesters we have here! :p
Bwahahahaha! Running through the same patch of poison oak he used to infect Sam's towel! LOVE IT!
I like how they are out to get each other, then they have to stop and work together to make sure John doesn't find out about any of this monkey business. Heehee.
Dean calling Sam "Samantha" is awesome!
I like that there seems to be something up with skunks. . .I've had days like that, where the same odd problemm keeps presenting itself. That's great!
"Secret stash of magazines." Teehee!
I like how Bobby just starts laughing. I could so see him doing that.
"Marry Poppins routine" Hahaha. I love that.
"Feigning sleep Dean and Sam listened to the adults and grinned at each other. Each brother thinking the same thing as they fell asleep, “You just wait until next time” oh yes there would defiantly be a next time."
I loved it! It was so funny and I could see them doing that when they were younger. Great job! Keep writing!
-peace-
~Salty Q
10Salty Q"“any more pranks and I see lots of shiny sharp weapon and lots of cross country running in your futures” Sam and Dean started to look innocent then."
This made me chuckle out loud! Brilliant.
"Dean called over to Sam “this is good at least now I don’t have to smell the shower after you’ve used it.” Sam retorted” at least I don’t have to listen to you while you sing while you’re out here.”"
Haha! You write the boys' humor well. I have a tiny suggestion, as I see you welcome them. When different characters speak, it is more clear if there is a new paragraph each time. I can tell who is talking, but it tends to make the paragraphs really long. (I kept losing my place. LOL!)
I like how stern you write John in this one. I really felt like he must just be fed up with the boys' silliness. :)
I like how they are both planning their next move at the same time. Such cunning little Winchesters we have here! :p
Bwahahahaha! Running through the same patch of poison oak he used to infect Sam's towel! LOVE IT!
I like how they are out to get each other, then they have to stop and work together to make sure John doesn't find out about any of this monkey business. Heehee.
Dean calling Sam "Samantha" is awesome!
I like that there seems to be something up with skunks. . .I've had days like that, where the same odd problemm keeps presenting itself. That's great!
"Secret stash of magazines." Teehee!
I like how Bobby just starts laughing. I could so see him doing that.
"Marry Poppins routine" Hahaha. I love that.
"Feigning sleep Dean and Sam listened to the adults and grinned at each other. Each brother thinking the same thing as they fell asleep, “You just wait until next time” oh yes there would defiantly be a next time."
I loved it! It was so funny and I could see them doing that when they were younger. Great job! Keep writing!
-peace-
~Salty Q
6/30/2008 c1 12jmstevens
not sure what I can say here...except I can't remember who Joshua is...was he a character on the show?
Was pretty cute when Sam and Dean ran into skunks not once but twice. :D
12jmstevensnot sure what I can say here...except I can't remember who Joshua is...was he a character on the show?
Was pretty cute when Sam and Dean ran into skunks not once but twice. :D
4/13/2008 c1 38Ihni
Bwahaha, that was great. I like that they didn't tell John, but kept their little prank war to themselves. That's how brothers do it.
38IhniBwahaha, that was great. I like that they didn't tell John, but kept their little prank war to themselves. That's how brothers do it.
12/30/2007 c1 9ToxicLullaby
That was really good! I can actually imagine that happening. Although, I think the ending would have been funnier if when John or one of the other guys, most likely John, went to bed, the bed breaking like it did when Dean was on it haha. But, you still did a really good job.
9ToxicLullabyThat was really good! I can actually imagine that happening. Although, I think the ending would have been funnier if when John or one of the other guys, most likely John, went to bed, the bed breaking like it did when Dean was on it haha. But, you still did a really good job.
11/20/2007 c1 83blue peanut m and m
Hey cavetrollgrl,
Thanks for the shout out, you really didn't need to, and thanks for being brave enough to share your fic with us.
I thoroughly enjoyed it, I could picture the two of them in my mind going over their plans for revenge.
Great first fic, I hope that it gives you the confidence to post more, I'll wait patiently to see.
Thanks again for sharing it with us, catch you soon, Peanut x
83blue peanut m and mHey cavetrollgrl,
Thanks for the shout out, you really didn't need to, and thanks for being brave enough to share your fic with us.
I thoroughly enjoyed it, I could picture the two of them in my mind going over their plans for revenge.
Great first fic, I hope that it gives you the confidence to post more, I'll wait patiently to see.
Thanks again for sharing it with us, catch you soon, Peanut x
11/19/2007 c1 13immortalwizardpirateelf-fan
RTFLMAO! Oh this is too funny. Winchester Prank Wars at their best.
13immortalwizardpirateelf-fanRTFLMAO! Oh this is too funny. Winchester Prank Wars at their best.