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5/13/2008 c3 36Elizabeth Bartlett
oh my...-dies from laughter-

made my day reading this...wonderful as usual and can't wait for more. :D
2/22/2008 c2 43Dysthymia
This second chapter is also good, but again there are some errors you should look into. The errors are mainly grammatical and punctuation errors. There are places where you didn't add a period to the end of a sentace or ended a sentance with a comma. There was a place at the begining where a letter that should not have been capitalized had been capitalized. Peach might be a noun, but it shouldn't start with a capital letter unless it's the begining of a sentance.

Again, good fic. I'm looking foward to the next chapter.
2/14/2008 c2 36Elizabeth Bartlett
oh dear...sometimes it amazes me how thick-headed the boys can be. :)

Loved the chapter and hope you update soon!
2/14/2008 c2 33M. Pond
I like this story and it's a very good idea. Plus you're actually including the whole team fairly which is good - no one is outshining someone else.
1/4/2008 c1 43Dysthymia
This is a good fic, but you really need to work on grammar. You have a lot of comas that should be periods. There was one place where you should have used the enter key. Other than that, it's pretty good.
11/22/2007 c1 Hazelayes
This looks promising, I'm glad to see it's TBC. i like the inclusive way you've written all the characters and they sound very true. Please continue :-)

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