for You Came Back9/15/2009 c11 Stillwaterrs
I read your story this afternoon and I enjoyed it very much. You said you didn't leave it with a cliffhanger, but I think you did - although you've signaled that you're going to send them back in time, you haven't hinted how far back, or whether they will take their full knowledge with them. I think it will be fun to see what you do with that kind of wiggle room.
I know what you mean about the incredible disappearing muse. I'm in the middle of a story myself - I posted an excerpt today mostly as a way to defeat my own procrastination.
You're doing a wonderful job with Keith in particular. It would be very easy to lay it on too heavily with him; you've got a lighter touch, and it's working well. Good luck with the rest of the story.
I read your story this afternoon and I enjoyed it very much. You said you didn't leave it with a cliffhanger, but I think you did - although you've signaled that you're going to send them back in time, you haven't hinted how far back, or whether they will take their full knowledge with them. I think it will be fun to see what you do with that kind of wiggle room.
I know what you mean about the incredible disappearing muse. I'm in the middle of a story myself - I posted an excerpt today mostly as a way to defeat my own procrastination.
You're doing a wonderful job with Keith in particular. It would be very easy to lay it on too heavily with him; you've got a lighter touch, and it's working well. Good luck with the rest of the story.
7/30/2009 c11 Hysink
Sque! You FINALLY uploaded another chappie :D. So, so ,so unbelievably happy! More, more, more, more please :D. Gotta tell you Jenn, you still have it! Great chapter as usual, love the tempo...so touching. More, more, more!
Sque! You FINALLY uploaded another chappie :D. So, so ,so unbelievably happy! More, more, more, more please :D. Gotta tell you Jenn, you still have it! Great chapter as usual, love the tempo...so touching. More, more, more!
7/8/2009 c11 
18DENSI.ItsaLoveStory
Welcome Back!...lol...
WOW... you might not have idea how is great having you back on FF... I was really missing your story... I love all your writings. Anyway.. this chapter as all others was amazing, you surprised me in every line; all the feelings, revelations and realizations between Bren and Shal was really great and you really get me scared with Shal and Jesse deaths...you're the best and I know that you already know that but never is too much to repeat this, it's good for the ego...lol... it was worth to wait for an update...
Love you girl and I can't wait for the next one; kisses and hugs on you and the girls ;)...
18DENSI.ItsaLoveStoryWelcome Back!...lol...
WOW... you might not have idea how is great having you back on FF... I was really missing your story... I love all your writings. Anyway.. this chapter as all others was amazing, you surprised me in every line; all the feelings, revelations and realizations between Bren and Shal was really great and you really get me scared with Shal and Jesse deaths...you're the best and I know that you already know that but never is too much to repeat this, it's good for the ego...lol... it was worth to wait for an update...
Love you girl and I can't wait for the next one; kisses and hugs on you and the girls ;)...
7/7/2009 c11 Lisa
I'm really glad that you are continuing to work on this story. I've had a great time reading it. Hurry with the next chapters.
I'm really glad that you are continuing to work on this story. I've had a great time reading it. Hurry with the next chapters.
4/3/2009 c1 Natascha
It was great, I live in The Netherlands and I just watched all the episodes. I couldn't stand it when it was over. There has to be more right and you are doing one fine job with it.
Please can you keep me posted of the rest of your story.
You can reach me through my email:
Thanx Reed you soon;-)
It was great, I live in The Netherlands and I just watched all the episodes. I couldn't stand it when it was over. There has to be more right and you are doing one fine job with it.
Please can you keep me posted of the rest of your story.
You can reach me through my email:
Thanx Reed you soon;-)
9/17/2008 c10 24BlackRaven
Wonderful! There is just no other word other then that!
I'm re-watching the series and I had a tast for some fiction and stubled upon this little gem... aside for a few really minor spelling mistakes that were probably due to typing and rewrites - it was perfect!
I do hope you keep going!
And now - this goes on my favorites!
24BlackRavenWonderful! There is just no other word other then that!
I'm re-watching the series and I had a tast for some fiction and stubled upon this little gem... aside for a few really minor spelling mistakes that were probably due to typing and rewrites - it was perfect!
I do hope you keep going!
And now - this goes on my favorites!
8/23/2008 c10 Emma
Sorry again for taking so long, as much as I'm enjoying my holiday I think I might need another one just to recover! I have hardly sat down all week!
Anyway, what can I say? This story is getting better and better with every chapter. I am truely loving it. Thank you.
I liked how Keith has decided to give Shalimar an out, he is such a lovely guy and it shows how much he cares for her that he would want her to be happy even if it is with someone else, someone that can love her the way she deserves, like Brennan does!
The wee bit with Lexa when she got up was so nice, she does care about the team even if they fight a little. what family doesnt? It showed her soft side in a way she would, silently and when no one would see it. Nicely done.
You never fail to amaze me when you write any interactions between Brennan and Shalimar, that was even better than the last chapter, the way they both opened up their hearts was more than I could ever have hoped for, once again it was amazing. Thank you.
I am wondering what the bad news Jesse has but I have an idea in my head and I cant wait to find out if I'm right. I am so looking forward to what happens next and seeing what you do with the ideas you told me about.
Hope you get chapter 11 done soon and if I can be of help just let me know. Oh and I had a look at the chapters you sent me back and I will be most likely using all of your suggestions then I will be reposting them. I'm also hoping to have the next chapter finished soon.
Sorry again for taking so long, as much as I'm enjoying my holiday I think I might need another one just to recover! I have hardly sat down all week!
Anyway, what can I say? This story is getting better and better with every chapter. I am truely loving it. Thank you.
I liked how Keith has decided to give Shalimar an out, he is such a lovely guy and it shows how much he cares for her that he would want her to be happy even if it is with someone else, someone that can love her the way she deserves, like Brennan does!
The wee bit with Lexa when she got up was so nice, she does care about the team even if they fight a little. what family doesnt? It showed her soft side in a way she would, silently and when no one would see it. Nicely done.
You never fail to amaze me when you write any interactions between Brennan and Shalimar, that was even better than the last chapter, the way they both opened up their hearts was more than I could ever have hoped for, once again it was amazing. Thank you.
I am wondering what the bad news Jesse has but I have an idea in my head and I cant wait to find out if I'm right. I am so looking forward to what happens next and seeing what you do with the ideas you told me about.
Hope you get chapter 11 done soon and if I can be of help just let me know. Oh and I had a look at the chapters you sent me back and I will be most likely using all of your suggestions then I will be reposting them. I'm also hoping to have the next chapter finished soon.
8/22/2008 c10 5karen147145
Yay you updated :D:D:D . ANd im glad Keith is starting to be fazed out. And i cant believe Brennan and Shalimar got interupted by Jesse. But i wonder what the bad news is.
And i love the Jesse and Lexa bits you wrote in, i'm a big Jesse/Lexa fan as well as a bren/Shal fan lol
5karen147145Yay you updated :D:D:D . ANd im glad Keith is starting to be fazed out. And i cant believe Brennan and Shalimar got interupted by Jesse. But i wonder what the bad news is.
And i love the Jesse and Lexa bits you wrote in, i'm a big Jesse/Lexa fan as well as a bren/Shal fan lol
8/22/2008 c10 shonnia
This whole chapter was so freakin heartfelt. The emotins that you showed were amazing. I'm really happy that Brennan and Shalimar got their emotions out and in the open. I like Lexa in this fic, she's sorta sensitive. Can't wait for more.
This whole chapter was so freakin heartfelt. The emotins that you showed were amazing. I'm really happy that Brennan and Shalimar got their emotions out and in the open. I like Lexa in this fic, she's sorta sensitive. Can't wait for more.
8/22/2008 c10 Rachel Fox Mulwray
Girl... i'm without words to tell you...I LUV YA...
FINALLY SHAL AND BREN are getting together...and that conversation between keith and shal was perfect("I think that there is someone who might be able to love you better than me...")wow...and then the confession from Shal to Bren (You, just you...)God...was so damn hot!so intense...
That's why i luv ya and your stories... you can join all the possible feelings all together with so intensity and make us wanting more and more everyday without ever been tired of it...
You can make our lives much more happy after so much time without MX... it's like MX never ended... Thank you soo much for that... YOU are ONE of the few writers that can this... We and specially me, Shal&Bren lovers, are eternally thankful for having you in our lives... K&Hs... your eternal fan...
Girl... i'm without words to tell you...I LUV YA...
FINALLY SHAL AND BREN are getting together...and that conversation between keith and shal was perfect("I think that there is someone who might be able to love you better than me...")wow...and then the confession from Shal to Bren (You, just you...)God...was so damn hot!so intense...
That's why i luv ya and your stories... you can join all the possible feelings all together with so intensity and make us wanting more and more everyday without ever been tired of it...
You can make our lives much more happy after so much time without MX... it's like MX never ended... Thank you soo much for that... YOU are ONE of the few writers that can this... We and specially me, Shal&Bren lovers, are eternally thankful for having you in our lives... K&Hs... your eternal fan...
8/22/2008 c10 Hysink
Hey! LOVE the chapter! The corrections look great, but the story's even greater! I read the chap again and it still gives me the tingles...anyway, any chance that my so-called 'theory' is correct? LoL, I'm just picking at straws here!
Hey! LOVE the chapter! The corrections look great, but the story's even greater! I read the chap again and it still gives me the tingles...anyway, any chance that my so-called 'theory' is correct? LoL, I'm just picking at straws here!
8/11/2008 c9 karen147145
:P Well i just thought i would told you that and im glad that your staying consistent with the story.
And i hope your back get better soon
I love the new chapter and i cant wait until you update the story to see where it goes. And i really hope brennan and shalimar get together and keith goes bye bye lol.
:P Well i just thought i would told you that and im glad that your staying consistent with the story.
And i hope your back get better soon
I love the new chapter and i cant wait until you update the story to see where it goes. And i really hope brennan and shalimar get together and keith goes bye bye lol.
8/11/2008 c9 Hysink
Yay! Finally! I sent u a message before reading this, and now...Boy, I still need to catch my breath after reading chp. 9. One word; INTENSE. I must say, it definitely lived up to expectations, hell it EXCEEDED it! Really, really, REALLY loved the scene at the end. At some point, I thought Keith would walk in on them, but that would have made it just too typical. LOVE it, love it, love it. That's all I can say. Still has a few technical errors, but who cares about those when the story is just SO GOOD! Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope it comes soon! *fingers crossed*
P.S. Expect more prodding...Coming Soon. LOL
Yay! Finally! I sent u a message before reading this, and now...Boy, I still need to catch my breath after reading chp. 9. One word; INTENSE. I must say, it definitely lived up to expectations, hell it EXCEEDED it! Really, really, REALLY loved the scene at the end. At some point, I thought Keith would walk in on them, but that would have made it just too typical. LOVE it, love it, love it. That's all I can say. Still has a few technical errors, but who cares about those when the story is just SO GOOD! Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope it comes soon! *fingers crossed*
P.S. Expect more prodding...Coming Soon. LOL