for Organization XIII and the great out doors8/26/2010 c5 Raegy-Chan
Hehe! Saix screams like a girl! XD Lol! Cougar attack!
Hehe! Saix screams like a girl! XD Lol! Cougar attack!
4/26/2008 c5 
6FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A
They're in real trouble now...if Zexion could stop smelling, what about the others? Why do they still stink?
6FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.AThey're in real trouble now...if Zexion could stop smelling, what about the others? Why do they still stink?
4/3/2008 c4 FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A
Haha, even Luxord lost at poker! I love Demyx-he's so cute!
Haha, even Luxord lost at poker! I love Demyx-he's so cute!
4/2/2008 c4 Masshiro-Inu
Its not a bad plot idea, but you seem to be making a lot of grammar mistakes, you might want to take more time to proof read your chapters, and add a little more detail to each chapter to make it longer and more enjoyable.
Like the first person that reveiwed said, this story has the same idea but their not completely the same. Keep updating.
Its not a bad plot idea, but you seem to be making a lot of grammar mistakes, you might want to take more time to proof read your chapters, and add a little more detail to each chapter to make it longer and more enjoyable.
Like the first person that reveiwed said, this story has the same idea but their not completely the same. Keep updating.
2/19/2008 c3 6FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A
...do I want to know what happens to them next? 'Cuz right now they seem screwed...
6FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A...do I want to know what happens to them next? 'Cuz right now they seem screwed...