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8/31/2014 c1 5MYK-ON
i like it!
12/30/2012 c1 ElaCharm
The story repeats half way though. Just thought you'd like to know. The story is very good by the way! XD
1/6/2010 c1 silversky-47
So glad to read it, so great story

your really great at naruhina stories

love your style
12/26/2008 c1 readingandrelaxing
lil: aw kawaii

spring: so kawaii
11/30/2007 c1 Aatar freak
i loved it. it was cool
11/26/2007 c1 5Rose Tiger
Beautiful.
11/24/2007 c1 Vicki
Nice job for a first Naruto fic,

had some great details, but you had

some grammer mistakes, oh well, great

job anyway!
11/22/2007 c1 8bloodlust002
this was great you should think about writing more for this I bet you could make it a big hit.
11/22/2007 c1 6Tw33ty JR
That was so sweet! Happy Thanxgivn! ^_^
11/22/2007 c1 25NotaPunk
Just wonderful!
11/22/2007 c1 hana-chwaaan
really corny, put some depth to your story on how they fell in love and give them something to bond to, also naruto acted kinda like a sasuke the real naruto is louder, sillier, and clumsy, but we love him anyway.
11/22/2007 c1 2NaruHinaLuver
How sweet! That was really romantic :D But you made alot of spelling mistakes lol... It happens xD

Still great!
11/22/2007 c1 2Shadowyin
OMG your story was awesomeness! Please update soon.
11/22/2007 c1 myrthill
it's nice, lots of misspelling but it's allright.

but, there is no conclusions. I mean, yes they kissed, yes they announced their feelings towards each other but naruto haven't announced his soon-to-be wife, although it is obvious who he'll choose, it still best to write it to make the story more interesting.

don't get discouraged, keep it up! :)

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