for Another Place To Fall11/16/2008 c10 
30TXJ
:-)
Maybe I missed an authors note somewhere but I was wondering why you created a professor instead of using Slughorn as potions professor?
Besides that question, I look forward to the next chapter.
30TXJ:-)
Maybe I missed an authors note somewhere but I was wondering why you created a professor instead of using Slughorn as potions professor?
Besides that question, I look forward to the next chapter.
11/14/2008 c10 65notwritten
You really have written a very interesting and cool chapter. Thank you for sharing it today. Have a good weekend. Keep safe. Keep smiling. :-) Can we have more please.
65notwrittenYou really have written a very interesting and cool chapter. Thank you for sharing it today. Have a good weekend. Keep safe. Keep smiling. :-) Can we have more please.
11/14/2008 c10 69wingnutdawn
Very well written. I do wonder at the real reason why that Professor was so obviously anxious get into Grangers mind.Her method of digging her nails into Grangers arm at the same time also verifies my suspicion that there is more.
Looking forward to reading more
69wingnutdawnVery well written. I do wonder at the real reason why that Professor was so obviously anxious get into Grangers mind.Her method of digging her nails into Grangers arm at the same time also verifies my suspicion that there is more.
Looking forward to reading more
10/17/2008 c9 REQUESTING-deletion-of-ACCOUNT
Um... that chapter was a little confusing at first but you got it cleared up, thank you for the 'one of us' explanation. This is still going well, looks like Sirius might just be getting a little crush... or not, depends on how you look at it right? Anyways good job once again, keep going!
Um... that chapter was a little confusing at first but you got it cleared up, thank you for the 'one of us' explanation. This is still going well, looks like Sirius might just be getting a little crush... or not, depends on how you look at it right? Anyways good job once again, keep going!
9/14/2008 c8 REQUESTING-deletion-of-ACCOUNT
This is really interesting. I love the whole phoenix tattoo that means you joined the Order, and the book idea seems very original. But couldn't you have kicked Lucius just a bit harder?
Great job, though.
Shadows
This is really interesting. I love the whole phoenix tattoo that means you joined the Order, and the book idea seems very original. But couldn't you have kicked Lucius just a bit harder?
Great job, though.
Shadows
1/15/2008 c7 liebefreak117
Please get a beta to proof read this. There are many misspelled words and grammatical errors. For example, it is "really" not "rely".
Please get a beta to proof read this. There are many misspelled words and grammatical errors. For example, it is "really" not "rely".