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5EliteOtaku111
This story is something I would recommend for something who looks after a good fanfic.

This story is something I would recommend for something who looks after a good fanfic.
1/4 c3 alefrosier
The writing is good the pacing is nice but let's start with the fact that using two swords is completely useless in the world of Naruto it prevents you from using ninjutsu and other techniques it's even worse for Naruto he has a lot of chakra it's a waste for him not to use it in ninjutsu where he can do much more damage and has greater flexibility and there is this thing with talking swords which is ridiculous too and the worst the romantic couple Naruto and Sakura is an aberration, so he can only achieve happiness by staying with someone who treated him like garbage and you wasted Hinata with Kiba the most useless character in the entire Naruto saga seriously that with dog breath, you could have made him stay with Tenten or Shizuka as a form of jiraia honor even if he doesn't deserve it, finally the many characters in the Naruto saga that would make a much better pair Sakura's problem is not that she is horrible or useless it's because she simply doesn't deserve Naruto, Hinata could have a better development of course qu and it could but she is by far the girl who most deserves Naruto.
The writing is good the pacing is nice but let's start with the fact that using two swords is completely useless in the world of Naruto it prevents you from using ninjutsu and other techniques it's even worse for Naruto he has a lot of chakra it's a waste for him not to use it in ninjutsu where he can do much more damage and has greater flexibility and there is this thing with talking swords which is ridiculous too and the worst the romantic couple Naruto and Sakura is an aberration, so he can only achieve happiness by staying with someone who treated him like garbage and you wasted Hinata with Kiba the most useless character in the entire Naruto saga seriously that with dog breath, you could have made him stay with Tenten or Shizuka as a form of jiraia honor even if he doesn't deserve it, finally the many characters in the Naruto saga that would make a much better pair Sakura's problem is not that she is horrible or useless it's because she simply doesn't deserve Naruto, Hinata could have a better development of course qu and it could but she is by far the girl who most deserves Naruto.
10/11/2022 c1 Zeke Hooper
interesting beginning.
interesting beginning.
9/28/2022 c28 Guest
I really enjoyed reading this it was amazing
I really enjoyed reading this it was amazing
8/11/2022 c18 BlazeStryker
Okay, I got it! Jiraiya, who WAS self-confessed as being bug-shagging crazy, found Tsunade's Winnie-the-Pooh fiasco and had a couple of his clones henge into those forms for the picture and future blackmail before having them poof and getting her out.
This sort of thing is likely how he got half the populace of the continent into his spying (largely on one another)...
Okay, I got it! Jiraiya, who WAS self-confessed as being bug-shagging crazy, found Tsunade's Winnie-the-Pooh fiasco and had a couple of his clones henge into those forms for the picture and future blackmail before having them poof and getting her out.
This sort of thing is likely how he got half the populace of the continent into his spying (largely on one another)...
8/11/2022 c2 BlazeStryker
Zabuza famously listed all the one-shot kill points in his initial confrontation with Team Seven on their way to Wave. As Hiashi did the heart-rupturing strike, I'm willing to bet that Tsunade took her chakra scalpel to the rest of those points.
Zabuza famously listed all the one-shot kill points in his initial confrontation with Team Seven on their way to Wave. As Hiashi did the heart-rupturing strike, I'm willing to bet that Tsunade took her chakra scalpel to the rest of those points.
8/6/2022 c13 kingstoniasiah
you had to some thing stupid now this story is ass like really bunny ears smh
you had to some thing stupid now this story is ass like really bunny ears smh
5/26/2022 c3 ROBERT
why not let naruto doing a book call it the master of the twin zanbatous he made in his 3 year run the vaillge and he put on the back a old team pic 7 on it and he put into the clan big black lock room with 2 swords and his old head band and vest too, when Robert Leroy he was 13 now and rank Super JON and ex abut black ops code name fox fire ,like Naurto he too had the fox in him now , both light yang and yin into him , his get the clans 3 swords now , with the zanbatous now his more powerful and his marring to Ion 3 and his had be the fox king now,
why not let naruto doing a book call it the master of the twin zanbatous he made in his 3 year run the vaillge and he put on the back a old team pic 7 on it and he put into the clan big black lock room with 2 swords and his old head band and vest too, when Robert Leroy he was 13 now and rank Super JON and ex abut black ops code name fox fire ,like Naurto he too had the fox in him now , both light yang and yin into him , his get the clans 3 swords now , with the zanbatous now his more powerful and his marring to Ion 3 and his had be the fox king now,
8/19/2021 c3 Guest
haha holy fuck this is bad. Gave it a try, NOT worth it
haha holy fuck this is bad. Gave it a try, NOT worth it
7/9/2021 c28 Guest
The best Narusaku fanfiction I have read so far. It is a wonderful story
The best Narusaku fanfiction I have read so far. It is a wonderful story
6/27/2021 c2 robert krause
when saying a good bay to the men of ZANBATOUS before him and putting on the new gave now ZAN BAD was the 1 MASTER of ZANBATOUS and 7 swords men ,when then he putting on the head band on the top of the gave now and saying good bay MATSTER OF ZANBATOUS , when then he had putting on the mask of red and green mask now, he had get on the road now,
when saying a good bay to the men of ZANBATOUS before him and putting on the new gave now ZAN BAD was the 1 MASTER of ZANBATOUS and 7 swords men ,when then he putting on the head band on the top of the gave now and saying good bay MATSTER OF ZANBATOUS , when then he had putting on the mask of red and green mask now, he had get on the road now,