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7/26/2011 c7 MissElon
This is a wonderful story, but i think it would be better/less confusing if your wrote the same story five times, each one focusing on each of the girls.
3/2/2008 c2 3littleirishwriter67
some grammatical errors, but good detail and good plot line, continue to try and use a lot of detail for the story to be longer and move faster.
3/2/2008 c1 littleirishwriter67
Really good start, lots of errors, I can and will fix them if u want.
2/28/2008 c1 Shiggity Shiggity Shwa
...I feel like I've read this before...
2/27/2008 c5 17RedEyedSurprise
I am liking this fic!
2/24/2008 c2 Altura
This is pretty good, I didn't expect them to have time traveled as kids... I thought that in some strange time, space parrodox, they were thier own Great great great great Grandparents lol... Keep up the great work Bev *Hug*
11/24/2007 c1 7xxroxy-dogxx
i like it

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