for Tails of Konoha's Vixen4/18/2008 c14 
1DeltaKyuubi
cool story hope you update soon
ps also this is just a suggestion but mabye you kill sakura when she fights akitsuki or something like that
1DeltaKyuubicool story hope you update soon
ps also this is just a suggestion but mabye you kill sakura when she fights akitsuki or something like that
4/17/2008 c14 1zesty cyanide
slutty, bitchy sakura is annoying me. i do hope that natsumi realizes sakuras true colors and kills her, or sth close to it.
update soon!
1zesty cyanideslutty, bitchy sakura is annoying me. i do hope that natsumi realizes sakuras true colors and kills her, or sth close to it.
update soon!
4/14/2008 c14 ICECOOLGIRL
LIKE THE STORY KEEP IT UP.
OH AND CAN YOU MAKE SAKURA REALISE THAT NATSUMI IS HER FRIEND.
LIKE THE STORY KEEP IT UP.
OH AND CAN YOU MAKE SAKURA REALISE THAT NATSUMI IS HER FRIEND.
4/11/2008 c14 person
i love this story! But im kinda wondering when this storys gonna finish because its barley starting on the beginning of shippuden so update me please.
i love this story! But im kinda wondering when this storys gonna finish because its barley starting on the beginning of shippuden so update me please.
4/9/2008 c14 Libello
Another good chapter. Liked it, was better looked through as there were not many errors in the text. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work and peace out!
Another good chapter. Liked it, was better looked through as there were not many errors in the text. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work and peace out!
4/8/2008 c14 84peppymint
Mixed feeling. On the one hand I'm glad Gaara is winning, he is the good guy. But Deidara is such a cool character. I don't want him to get squished.
84peppymintMixed feeling. On the one hand I'm glad Gaara is winning, he is the good guy. But Deidara is such a cool character. I don't want him to get squished.
4/8/2008 c14 8CherryBlossom313
Yea! A new chapter! Is Sakura going to continue hating Natsumi fovever or she going to stop? Update soon!
8CherryBlossom313Yea! A new chapter! Is Sakura going to continue hating Natsumi fovever or she going to stop? Update soon!
4/8/2008 c14 7VyseN
Other than the fact that you spelled Shukaku wrong, this is pretty much perfect in every way. There's just enough filler-content here to make us interested in what happens next time, and you managed to drive the plot foreward along with a little character development to boot. I can tell that you got yourself a good beta,although I have to admit I didn't have any big problems with your chapters before either. But as it is now, you can soon reach for the stars with your greedy little star-grabbing paws, so get going and have fun. You did good with this chapter!
7VyseNOther than the fact that you spelled Shukaku wrong, this is pretty much perfect in every way. There's just enough filler-content here to make us interested in what happens next time, and you managed to drive the plot foreward along with a little character development to boot. I can tell that you got yourself a good beta,although I have to admit I didn't have any big problems with your chapters before either. But as it is now, you can soon reach for the stars with your greedy little star-grabbing paws, so get going and have fun. You did good with this chapter!
4/1/2008 c13 Libello
Nice and enjoyable story. It was good, maybe some grammar that is off and that you miss some words in a sentence. Nothing much though. Would like to see some more romance between Sasuke and Natsumi next chapter, and Sakura falling on her butt, failing with her plans. Oh well, can't wait to read next chappie. Good luck and keep up the good work
Nice and enjoyable story. It was good, maybe some grammar that is off and that you miss some words in a sentence. Nothing much though. Would like to see some more romance between Sasuke and Natsumi next chapter, and Sakura falling on her butt, failing with her plans. Oh well, can't wait to read next chappie. Good luck and keep up the good work
3/25/2008 c13 die blaue Rose
I dont know how your planning to make sakura as a pric or change her views but I hope you do the later and if possible to vote or suggest sakura x lee pairing... and absolutely naruxsasu for the main pairing! so hope to see updates soon love it! :D
I dont know how your planning to make sakura as a pric or change her views but I hope you do the later and if possible to vote or suggest sakura x lee pairing... and absolutely naruxsasu for the main pairing! so hope to see updates soon love it! :D
3/23/2008 c13 32Lady Laran
I hear you, notepad is a pain in the butt. I wonder if Tsunade is going to advance Natsumi's rank since her teammates are way above her?
Great job!
32Lady LaranI hear you, notepad is a pain in the butt. I wonder if Tsunade is going to advance Natsumi's rank since her teammates are way above her?
Great job!