
2/11/2008 c10
2Yellow Eyed Arachnid
YO! WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE! YOUR STORY IS ONE OF THE FEW DECENT ONES OUT THERE SO PLEASE! i AM PRACTICALY BEGGING! UPDATE SOON!
:p
-TheDragonMaster1313

YO! WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE! YOUR STORY IS ONE OF THE FEW DECENT ONES OUT THERE SO PLEASE! i AM PRACTICALY BEGGING! UPDATE SOON!
:p
-TheDragonMaster1313
1/24/2008 c10 jllpill82
this is really good i like it a lot pleasepleaseplease continue ill um give you an imaginary pony :)
this is really good i like it a lot pleasepleaseplease continue ill um give you an imaginary pony :)
1/23/2008 c10 ddd
it was cool.
it was cool.
1/23/2008 c10
8CherryBlossom313
Finally a new and great chapter! Are the OCs going to play an important part? When are Natsumi and Sasuke going to meet? And when are they going to get together? Update soon!

Finally a new and great chapter! Are the OCs going to play an important part? When are Natsumi and Sasuke going to meet? And when are they going to get together? Update soon!
1/22/2008 c10 TheGodDamnAdam
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA poor sasuke that place hurts if its were im thinking and update soon this story is good but you could descibe how the demon world looks i imagine a firely lava place similer to mustafar from star wars but still it might be differant
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA poor sasuke that place hurts if its were im thinking and update soon this story is good but you could descibe how the demon world looks i imagine a firely lava place similer to mustafar from star wars but still it might be differant
1/15/2008 c9 azaneti
Please update soon!
I love your story!
Please update soon!
I love your story!
1/11/2008 c9
84peppymint
How ill this effect future encounters with the Akatsuki? I guess I'll just have to wait and find out. Great chapter.

How ill this effect future encounters with the Akatsuki? I guess I'll just have to wait and find out. Great chapter.
1/11/2008 c9 ddd
I hope to see more.
I hope to see more.