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2/19/2008 c6 1Xyan99

Naruto shold be kinda like an Arrancar (Not become one, just in the same field of abilities) so focus on Hollow abilities with Zanjutsu
2/19/2008 c6 8delta16669
I think the Reiatsu should be focused on first so that Naruto could help a lot more. Bring him up by 10 - 20% so he can interact easier. So I guess that means focus on Shinigami powers first. Demon powers can come latter and in bursts. That how I look at: demons are beings of power that do things just because they can. Why should their powers be any different?

Thats all I got for now.
2/19/2008 c6 SineDei
good some what orihime to be a pairing with naruto
2/19/2008 c6 TheDon1023
first and foremost Naruto needs to be able to affect spirits. once hes able to do that than his Taijutsu and Kenjutsu will be at top form again. then he needs to learn either Shunpo or Sonido so he can move hella fast again and run circles around everyone. id suggest he learn is Demon power after that, followed by Hollow Power. Shinigami power doesnt seem all that great except for the Kido and to me a Cero or Bala is much more bad ass than those long ass incantations they need to recite before using a kido. also the Shikai and Bankai are awesome too but hey, even Hallows have something like that now. also this is an apportunity to for Naruto to start using his genjutsus more. im sure they will come in hella handy since its one of the things that seems to be able to affect both humans and spiritual entities. anyways i look forward to reading next chapter so please update soon

-The Don
2/19/2008 c6 SpeeDemon
this chapter and a few before fet like another story I read but I cant remember the name.
2/19/2008 c6 1Zarcade
To answer your question; It is Good. The story, the descriptions, the jokes, etc. Keep the good work up ^^.


I vote for shinigami powers first.
2/19/2008 c6 YellowDemonFlash
Well it all depends on how you want to take the far you have Naruto on the good side interacting with the normal bleach characters but from the moment Naruto hit the bleach dimension you have been hinting about him going to the other side and how they are trying to keep him from choosing the hollows side and all that...could this be a bit of foreshadowing? For powers to focus on at the moment..why not Shock the shinigamis and have him not only know how to use shunpo and some shinigami incantations but also finally get his shikai and come close to messing up captains butts up :D or depending on how strong you make him, have him actually kick a captains butt and back :)
2/19/2008 c6 2taintedlegacy
Interesting, I can't wait to see what happens with Rukia's and Ichigo's "investigation" of Naruto. Update soon!
2/19/2008 c6 6Sharkteeth
great chapter i think naruto should concentrating on getting his demon power up to check
2/18/2008 c5 aback
it´s a fantastic story

give us the next chapter soon
2/17/2008 c5 6diimmortal
strange with the transformation and the armore but this story is cool cant wait for more till next time jane
2/11/2008 c5 3refused
I like it.

Perhaps a bit too much like Strawberry & Fishcake at times, but meh.

You also got some nice theories on the whole conversion, which was very well done. I don't know THAT much about Bleach but it kinda makes sense. Perhaps you overexplained it a bit, I could see it become boring at times, but again; meh.

I do wonder what pairing(s?) you've got in store for us, though. There's some hints of NaruxYoruichi, which would be sweet if you ask me, but yeah... We'll see, eh? ;)
2/1/2008 c5 8DrendeSalkash
its damn good. and the saddle bit at the end, damn funny.
1/31/2008 c5 KyubbiNaruto
I like it man uhh what are the pairing going to be again.
1/31/2008 c5 warprince2000
That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)(is this going to be a Harem fanfic? if so, can you add Soifon, Yoruichi, and Rangiku to Naruto's harem)
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