for NarutoxBleach FAILURE1/17/2008 c4 warprince2000
That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)
That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)
1/17/2008 c4 Starting a New Life
Story is progressing very nicely. Learning a little more about Naruto's past, his training, and his potential...I look foreword to more.
So Naruto can use his Youki still, and he is very powerful with it still...I am curious to see just how powerful he becomes.
Keep up the god work
Till next time
Story is progressing very nicely. Learning a little more about Naruto's past, his training, and his potential...I look foreword to more.
So Naruto can use his Youki still, and he is very powerful with it still...I am curious to see just how powerful he becomes.
Keep up the god work
Till next time
1/17/2008 c3 Myleftshoe
this is a holy pice of.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.gold not scince dn have i read something soo good
this is a holy pice of.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.gold not scince dn have i read something soo good
1/16/2008 c3 FenrirCrinos
excelente, me gusto como quedo con los retoques, te felicito
espero el proximo capitulo
nos leemos
excelente, me gusto como quedo con los retoques, te felicito
espero el proximo capitulo
nos leemos
1/15/2008 c3 
2Lord Leon Towasoki
excellent start to the story. it explains why and how Naruto got to the bleach world and looks like it'll be interesting.
2Lord Leon Towasokiexcellent start to the story. it explains why and how Naruto got to the bleach world and looks like it'll be interesting.
1/14/2008 c3 19Dragon and Sword Master
Interesting. The relationship between Kisuke, Naruto and Yoruichi is starting to heat up and I can't wait to see what happens when Naruto first goes to school...I'd love to see what happens when he runs into Tatsuki (Sorry, but I'm a Tatsuki fan at heart)
Anyways, I like how you're hinting at a Yoruichi/Naruto but I'm not sure if that's going to happen or not...
19Dragon and Sword MasterInteresting. The relationship between Kisuke, Naruto and Yoruichi is starting to heat up and I can't wait to see what happens when Naruto first goes to school...I'd love to see what happens when he runs into Tatsuki (Sorry, but I'm a Tatsuki fan at heart)
Anyways, I like how you're hinting at a Yoruichi/Naruto but I'm not sure if that's going to happen or not...
1/14/2008 c3 1MobMentality
Well, I'm fully satisfied. You met and exceeded all expectations. Though the only thing you really needed to do so was pair Naruto with Yoruichi. I'm bouncing in my seat in anticipation of future chapters.
1MobMentalityWell, I'm fully satisfied. You met and exceeded all expectations. Though the only thing you really needed to do so was pair Naruto with Yoruichi. I'm bouncing in my seat in anticipation of future chapters.
1/14/2008 c2 MobMentality
So far so good. I can agree with the necessity of limiting Naruto's power somewhat, though I hope you concur that when he does access Bankai he should be a GOD. I mean, all nine tails, a sword composed of the soul of Kyuubi, and it appears Vizard powers as well, he'll be unbeatable, even more so than he was in his own world. Also great interaction between Naruto and Yoruichi, by far my favourite Bleach character. Keep it up.
So far so good. I can agree with the necessity of limiting Naruto's power somewhat, though I hope you concur that when he does access Bankai he should be a GOD. I mean, all nine tails, a sword composed of the soul of Kyuubi, and it appears Vizard powers as well, he'll be unbeatable, even more so than he was in his own world. Also great interaction between Naruto and Yoruichi, by far my favourite Bleach character. Keep it up.
1/14/2008 c1 MobMentality
I don't usually review before the latest chapter of a story, but I wanted to say this now. From what I have read so far, I believe this could become the greatest Bleach crossover I've ever read. Good writing, supremely powerful Naruto, infinite possibilities, I can't wait to read the next few chapters. I'll let you know if they meet my ridiculously high expectations of them.
I don't usually review before the latest chapter of a story, but I wanted to say this now. From what I have read so far, I believe this could become the greatest Bleach crossover I've ever read. Good writing, supremely powerful Naruto, infinite possibilities, I can't wait to read the next few chapters. I'll let you know if they meet my ridiculously high expectations of them.
1/14/2008 c3 RaveDemon
this is the first cross over i read and its really cool keep it up oh yeah are there ganna be lemons?
this is the first cross over i read and its really cool keep it up oh yeah are there ganna be lemons?