for NarutoxBleach FAILURE11/28/2007 c2 Starting a New Life
well...end of this chap was to similiar to Uncle Joes for my taste, but since he doesnt seem to care, I dont really.
I hope you are not taking the same path as Uncel Joe did. Different story ideas and everything. I would be pretty bored if this fic was the same.
Im not sure if the whole scene at the end of the chapter really fits with the Naruto you are making...never got a hint that he was a horn dog or playful...and then you throw in Uncle Joes part and he suddenly is...
I look foreword to seeing and update, and where you take this...if it is to similiar to Uncle Joe's though, I will probably stop reading it
well...end of this chap was to similiar to Uncle Joes for my taste, but since he doesnt seem to care, I dont really.
I hope you are not taking the same path as Uncel Joe did. Different story ideas and everything. I would be pretty bored if this fic was the same.
Im not sure if the whole scene at the end of the chapter really fits with the Naruto you are making...never got a hint that he was a horn dog or playful...and then you throw in Uncle Joes part and he suddenly is...
I look foreword to seeing and update, and where you take this...if it is to similiar to Uncle Joe's though, I will probably stop reading it
11/28/2007 c2 
5r2d2cool
ok... if you had taken ideas from uncle joe i'd be ok... but that was basically the EXACT same thing that uncle joe wrote! why should i read your story if it's the same as uncle joe's? please answer this...
5r2d2coolok... if you had taken ideas from uncle joe i'd be ok... but that was basically the EXACT same thing that uncle joe wrote! why should i read your story if it's the same as uncle joe's? please answer this...
11/28/2007 c2 2Chaos and Creation
The second have of this chapter is frankly almost exactly like Uncle Joe's Naruto/Bleach crossover. Hopefully he gave you permission to do so.
2Chaos and CreationThe second have of this chapter is frankly almost exactly like Uncle Joe's Naruto/Bleach crossover. Hopefully he gave you permission to do so.
11/28/2007 c2 6Uncle Joe
alot more borrowed from my fic than i thought...but as long as you deviate on your own path you wont get no complaints from me
6Uncle Joealot more borrowed from my fic than i thought...but as long as you deviate on your own path you wont get no complaints from me
11/28/2007 c2 2Lord of the Morning
GWAHAHAHA! That was awesome. Yoruichi better watch her ass! Wonder what's going to happen with his zanpaku-to, considering he attacked the hollow when the Shinigami said to let a shinigami touch it first. Good job and keep up the good work!
2Lord of the MorningGWAHAHAHA! That was awesome. Yoruichi better watch her ass! Wonder what's going to happen with his zanpaku-to, considering he attacked the hollow when the Shinigami said to let a shinigami touch it first. Good job and keep up the good work!
11/28/2007 c2 Nai No Tenshi
Good,good I like it.It has a good plot going on.Can't wait to see what happens!
Good,good I like it.It has a good plot going on.Can't wait to see what happens!
11/28/2007 c2 16Sharingan-hater86
good story although that second chapter was almost a complete copy of another stories first chap(part of it) the strawberry and the fishcake if you haven't read it anyway its still good ja nee
16Sharingan-hater86good story although that second chapter was almost a complete copy of another stories first chap(part of it) the strawberry and the fishcake if you haven't read it anyway its still good ja nee
11/26/2007 c1 fox709
That was interesting. I'm actually curious to see how the next chapter will go. But i'm afraid to say i don't understand what the seal does(as in the second way to bind a shinigami's power).
Please continue writing.
Thank You(Bows to the sensei)
That was interesting. I'm actually curious to see how the next chapter will go. But i'm afraid to say i don't understand what the seal does(as in the second way to bind a shinigami's power).
Please continue writing.
Thank You(Bows to the sensei)
11/25/2007 c1 Relicarmor
Man this story is awesome... The begining you put sets the reader up with a perfect but vague picture of how your going to do things... I like it you have your basic storyline set up but you left yourself enough room to do whatever the hell you want NICE! can't wait to see more of this story... Love your works man can't wait for more releases!
Man this story is awesome... The begining you put sets the reader up with a perfect but vague picture of how your going to do things... I like it you have your basic storyline set up but you left yourself enough room to do whatever the hell you want NICE! can't wait to see more of this story... Love your works man can't wait for more releases!