for Convincing8/13/2008 c1 
2Punky Princess 89
I really liked this, it was so cute! Just the thought of him chasing her thru the city and the way he knew how to get his hat back was hilarious! If you ever think of continuing, u shuld so write a cane stealing one!
2Punky Princess 89I really liked this, it was so cute! Just the thought of him chasing her thru the city and the way he knew how to get his hat back was hilarious! If you ever think of continuing, u shuld so write a cane stealing one!
12/11/2007 c1 3Johannas mirror
OH. my. heavens.
The world of newsies recognizes the absolute cutest ficlet that ever exhisted into its hall of fame.
you are my hero...
3Johannas mirrorOH. my. heavens.
The world of newsies recognizes the absolute cutest ficlet that ever exhisted into its hall of fame.
you are my hero...
12/7/2007 c1 11FlamingYingYang
i liked it. i think you need a page break and maybe like right befor the kiss have spot say somthing but other than that i see nothing wrong with it. it's an interesting story and i can't wait to read more from you. Reya
11FlamingYingYangi liked it. i think you need a page break and maybe like right befor the kiss have spot say somthing but other than that i see nothing wrong with it. it's an interesting story and i can't wait to read more from you. Reya