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12/31/2007 c1 16aussiesheila47
This was gorgeous. I love Lily/Severus, and you've captured Sev's desperateness (is that a word?) perfectly. Why is it that males can never say 'I love you' when they need to? A great story - keep it up!
12/29/2007 c1 ErinHerz
*sob* I really have to stop reading SeverusxLily, it so sad...

but I love it...

but I have to find a cute and HAPPY RLSB fic to read nowxD
11/26/2007 c1 11RavenpuffDisneyNerd13
That was amazing! Please write more!
11/26/2007 c1 22citrinestone1000
Thanks for sharing. Yes I believe Severus tried and it wasn’t enough for some people. Hem, hem Lily. Without out her forgiveness it was hard for him move forward. She didn’t have to continue the friendship but she should have forgiven him.
11/26/2007 c1 10openattheclose
I loved this. You evoke their emotions so well and the 'I tried' part is a beautiful reacurring theme. Thanks for writing.

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