for A New Day9/22/2013 c1 
8DeathFrisbee221
Aww, so sad that neither of them live long enough to have their dream together *sobs into handkerchief*
8DeathFrisbee221Aww, so sad that neither of them live long enough to have their dream together *sobs into handkerchief*
9/14/2013 c1 DeathFrisbee221
Awww... You made me sad... :( Absolutely loved it!
Awww... You made me sad... :( Absolutely loved it!
5/13/2010 c1 8marylinevelyn
Oh I like this, very sweet. I love the beginning sentence of "it was a new day". I feel like that was very appropriate.
8marylinevelynOh I like this, very sweet. I love the beginning sentence of "it was a new day". I feel like that was very appropriate.
9/26/2009 c1 24pipsqueak66
Aw very sweet. I liked it! Just an fyi, when you want to do a "..." you are actually supposed to do three .'s with a space in between ex: ". . . " just fyi! Love the scene!
24pipsqueak66Aw very sweet. I liked it! Just an fyi, when you want to do a "..." you are actually supposed to do three .'s with a space in between ex: ". . . " just fyi! Love the scene!
4/12/2008 c1 14KeepingAmused
Ohh, that's beautiful. Marian's swollen belly!
I could feel Robin's heart swelling throughout that dream. It's so sweet and ironic that our cocky little outlaw exchanges his mind between terrifying nightmares and simple hopes. Sniff.
This makes the season finale all the more painful. DAMMIT. Why oh WHY?
14KeepingAmusedOhh, that's beautiful. Marian's swollen belly!
I could feel Robin's heart swelling throughout that dream. It's so sweet and ironic that our cocky little outlaw exchanges his mind between terrifying nightmares and simple hopes. Sniff.
This makes the season finale all the more painful. DAMMIT. Why oh WHY?
1/5/2008 c1 Oviedo
So Sad! Gosh i'm so depressed now, no no not because of your story, its a beautiful story. Im just so sad at how the writers messed up so badly and now none of what you wrote could ever happen.
So Sad! Gosh i'm so depressed now, no no not because of your story, its a beautiful story. Im just so sad at how the writers messed up so badly and now none of what you wrote could ever happen.
12/3/2007 c1 62Glorious Clio
Mm... very good. Excellent word choice. My only complaint is that it is too short! Good job, and keep writing.
62Glorious ClioMm... very good. Excellent word choice. My only complaint is that it is too short! Good job, and keep writing.
11/27/2007 c1 1110000111100001111000111
Poor Robin! Well written, easy to read. When i read the first bit i was like "WOW everythings all right for RObin and Marian"
and then the second bit it was a shame for him because it's not real but still he doesn't give up.
If only i had that amoung of will power *discards geography homework onto floor giving up on it*
Anyway, loved it. All of it. Is there going to be more? I think you could do a bit of Robin/Marian. Maybe Robin could tell Marian about his dream? That would be interesting.
Nice one, thanks,
Paula x
Poor Robin! Well written, easy to read. When i read the first bit i was like "WOW everythings all right for RObin and Marian"
and then the second bit it was a shame for him because it's not real but still he doesn't give up.
If only i had that amoung of will power *discards geography homework onto floor giving up on it*
Anyway, loved it. All of it. Is there going to be more? I think you could do a bit of Robin/Marian. Maybe Robin could tell Marian about his dream? That would be interesting.
Nice one, thanks,
Paula x