
2/20/2008 c3 amber
this story was absolutely beautiful. well written and very emotional. you have a great talent. update soon for you have an avid fan on your hands. keep up the good work.
this story was absolutely beautiful. well written and very emotional. you have a great talent. update soon for you have an avid fan on your hands. keep up the good work.
2/19/2008 c3
36unique.normality
Okay,
there is only one word to describe this:
WONDERFUL
and awesome, great, amazing, detailed, loving, and and...
yeah, thats more than one word, but I doubt you mind
^.-

Okay,
there is only one word to describe this:
WONDERFUL
and awesome, great, amazing, detailed, loving, and and...
yeah, thats more than one word, but I doubt you mind
^.-
2/19/2008 c3
3Ella Bridi
I think you are a very talented writer!
Great chapter!
Please, keep updating.

I think you are a very talented writer!
Great chapter!
Please, keep updating.
2/18/2008 c3
6hpfan87
Great story! I appreciate how accurate and realistic you portrayed the characters. Update soon please!

Great story! I appreciate how accurate and realistic you portrayed the characters. Update soon please!
2/18/2008 c3
5rgfanfreak
i really like this.
it's well written,and i really like your portrayls of the characters.
it's realistic!
keep it up :]

i really like this.
it's well written,and i really like your portrayls of the characters.
it's realistic!
keep it up :]
2/17/2008 c2
36unique.normality
Awesome, awesome writing
I can't even begin to imagine the love Ron and Hermione have for each other, and I can't wait to experience it
Are you going to be updating soon?

Awesome, awesome writing
I can't even begin to imagine the love Ron and Hermione have for each other, and I can't wait to experience it
Are you going to be updating soon?
12/1/2007 c1 random
otherwise it was very well written and interesting
otherwise it was very well written and interesting
12/1/2007 c1 random
Just one thing...are you saying that Ron and Hermione had Rose and Hugo as twins, because in the epilogue it states that Hugo is younger. Also they didn't have a third child...only two. READ THE EPILOGUE HONEY!
Just one thing...are you saying that Ron and Hermione had Rose and Hugo as twins, because in the epilogue it states that Hugo is younger. Also they didn't have a third child...only two. READ THE EPILOGUE HONEY!
11/30/2007 c2 wasu
hi
I love it
awesome ,really!
so please update very soon and keep it up
bye
wasu
ps. brilliant work,really!
hi
I love it
awesome ,really!
so please update very soon and keep it up
bye
wasu
ps. brilliant work,really!
11/28/2007 c1 Amy
This was beautiful! Very well written.
This was beautiful! Very well written.
11/28/2007 c1 randomperson
this was really well written. as a one shot i like the build up to the end and the symbolism. i felt that the last line was intended to make the readers emotion swell, or at least thats how i percieved it. i am a generally picky and judgemental person when i read fanfics and i'm never satisfied but i wouldn't critisize this one. it was written by someone who actually KNOWS how to write. well done! good imagery as well. and the bit about the hufflepuff pulled some heartstrings also.
this was really well written. as a one shot i like the build up to the end and the symbolism. i felt that the last line was intended to make the readers emotion swell, or at least thats how i percieved it. i am a generally picky and judgemental person when i read fanfics and i'm never satisfied but i wouldn't critisize this one. it was written by someone who actually KNOWS how to write. well done! good imagery as well. and the bit about the hufflepuff pulled some heartstrings also.