
3/19/2022 c8
23Lalaith Yamainu
SO CUTE, and so fantastically in character! I love that he gets swept up a bit and can’t resist expediting his plans a bit.

SO CUTE, and so fantastically in character! I love that he gets swept up a bit and can’t resist expediting his plans a bit.
3/9/2021 c8 297699767660
honestly i'm left speechless and don't know how to put the mess that is my brain into words.
in short, NaruMai brainrot.
it's just BRILLIANT. this fic so fresh, new, and addictive. You really have a way with narration and execution. The pace is amazing as well, characterisations spot-on, the plot intriguing. and everything is just FLUFFY. very Naru-like fluffy, which is just brilliant.
i feel like writing in Naru's viewpoint is incredibily hard as we could easily go out of character. but damn the way you write Naru and his complicated thought-process and his stubborn single-mindedness is simply beautiful. How you managed to do that is beyond me.
ugh. Brilliant. just brilliant.
honestly i'm left speechless and don't know how to put the mess that is my brain into words.
in short, NaruMai brainrot.
it's just BRILLIANT. this fic so fresh, new, and addictive. You really have a way with narration and execution. The pace is amazing as well, characterisations spot-on, the plot intriguing. and everything is just FLUFFY. very Naru-like fluffy, which is just brilliant.
i feel like writing in Naru's viewpoint is incredibily hard as we could easily go out of character. but damn the way you write Naru and his complicated thought-process and his stubborn single-mindedness is simply beautiful. How you managed to do that is beyond me.
ugh. Brilliant. just brilliant.
3/9/2021 c7 297699767660
not Naru scheduling their kiss ㅠㅠ but god somehow it makes sense that Naru would do that xD
absolute gem. this is a gem.
not Naru scheduling their kiss ㅠㅠ but god somehow it makes sense that Naru would do that xD
absolute gem. this is a gem.
3/9/2021 c5 297699767660
god Naru's entire scheme to go on dates Mai, his ideas are kinda genius honestly xD
god Naru's entire scheme to go on dates Mai, his ideas are kinda genius honestly xD
3/9/2021 c3 297699767660
He sure as hell wasn't thankful, and he didn't appreciate her feelings—he resented them
DAMN. while it's harsh, it's absolutely Naru. Even in the manga he has emphasized more than once that he doesn't care that people like him.
this character study is amazing, it lines up perfectly what the canon materials show us. it's as if this is all an extended canon
He sure as hell wasn't thankful, and he didn't appreciate her feelings—he resented them
DAMN. while it's harsh, it's absolutely Naru. Even in the manga he has emphasized more than once that he doesn't care that people like him.
this character study is amazing, it lines up perfectly what the canon materials show us. it's as if this is all an extended canon
3/9/2021 c2 297699767660
no but i want to see Naru offending John though xD it'd be a sight to see, the ice cube and the literal ball of sunshine himself
no but i want to see Naru offending John though xD it'd be a sight to see, the ice cube and the literal ball of sunshine himself
3/5/2019 c1 Guest
The interaction between Naru and Lin was great. It reminded me of Sheldon and Leonard from Big Bang theory for some reason and I loved it
The interaction between Naru and Lin was great. It reminded me of Sheldon and Leonard from Big Bang theory for some reason and I loved it
8/3/2018 c8
3Ruby Cider
this story was marvelous! Original in the plot and execurion... but like, this is so incredible I'm shocked that I'm reading it just now!

this story was marvelous! Original in the plot and execurion... but like, this is so incredible I'm shocked that I'm reading it just now!
7/18/2017 c8 orangestorange
I enjoyed the story! I like your perspective on Naru's character. Just, kinda wondering if Yasu is still on the library... Poor yasu lol
I enjoyed the story! I like your perspective on Naru's character. Just, kinda wondering if Yasu is still on the library... Poor yasu lol
2/26/2017 c8 Weasel Fu
I really like your story. I think you did a good job on Naru's (possible) character and on the others as well. Thanks!
I really like your story. I think you did a good job on Naru's (possible) character and on the others as well. Thanks!
2/14/2017 c3 Precious Power
Nah !I'm more of an ice cream person when it comes to movies!But thanks for the offer!
Nah !I'm more of an ice cream person when it comes to movies!But thanks for the offer!
12/22/2016 c8 The Night Whisperer
LOL XD I think it's adorable how Naru wants to keep planning his future with Mai. It just shows how committed he is to her :) And I hope it continues to stay that way for the many years to come.
LOL XD I think it's adorable how Naru wants to keep planning his future with Mai. It just shows how committed he is to her :) And I hope it continues to stay that way for the many years to come.